- Illustrated Poetry
- Effortlessly...
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Complete,
The abandonment of the senses
All things morally contractual,
Evaporate…
For within this choking airspace
I find the very breath I need
To restore my balance
Trapped, within your lungs…
I shame me here, effortlessly and forceful
The magnitude of your sex
Leaves me speechless, with no justification
To refrain from this indulgence
As the invisible limbs
Wrap and twist, I writhe and I follow…
Begging softly, for your mutual deluge
To pull me in further.
- COMMENTS
our lithesome figures err in their favor. TK U MLJ LV NV
there are no comments on your work. It;s a shame and a loss to everyone who enjoys poetry.
This is another excellent piece but you do not need the ellipses. A period would suffice and in the case of the second strophe, it weakens it. The second strophe is my favorite but all of them are strong. You have such a talent, I loved your site and am glad to see that your poetry and art is not languishing here, waiting for someone to accidentally discover it.