- Erotic Poetry
- Her Curves
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I kneel between her legs,
entranced by her slumbering form.
So different from mine,
a field of beauteous curves, my eyes travel.
The rondure of her ass, the curve of her hips,
The swell of her breasts, the circle around her nipple,
The arc of her neck, the bow of her lips, the sweep of her hair,
Endless curves, with nary a straight line,
A beckoning field of sinuosity.
I'm mesmerized,
enthralled by her beauty,
so complex, so perfect,
even if she argues otherwise.
The arch of her brow, the lobes of her ear,
the bend of her shoulder, valley between her tits,
the camber of her belly, the indenture of her navel,
the rise of her mound, paired half-moons between her thighs,
the hidden hole between her legs, a particular favorite.
I'm not like her.
Not soft, not smooth.
Not anymore.
I'm hard and straining, desiring her.
A field of curlicues where I join with her,
a shining pearl, hidden above where we meet, gentle curves everywhere.
The welcoming flesh, curved around me,
clutching, conforming, opening, a circle of welcome.
My favorite curve? Almost.
Wonderful, but fleeting. A glorious moment,
entrancing, thrilling,
and if not for one other, it would be number one.
I search for it, quietly,
thrusting inside of her, watching her curves come to life.
The crescent of her eyelid raising,
her blue irises exposed.
And there it is,
sending my heart soaring,
my favorite curve.
The gentle smile on her lips.
- COMMENTS
Wow.
I'm not sure what all these other people are talking about, not sure I care. What you need to here is that you reached me. I wish to be seen as you saw her. I think we all do.
Nicely conveyed! Sensual and appealing. Interesting how lips sending him spring instead of the previous curve! ;-)
The way you represent the beauty of the female body is mesmerizing! Especially the climax,so innocent.
I don't know how many authors here are poets. Never tried checking out the poetry on this website. But your poem brought a smile(again) to me. :) If the poets here are as good as you, then I might need to rethink my reading strategies here at Literotica. :) :)
A sweet poem.
This was a very sweet and creative poem! It definitely shows there are men out there who appreciate every inch of their woman's body. Super sweet, I appreciate it!
however voting without comments leads one to suspect many things the least of which was the poem wasn't read, also it is probably good form to leave a few if you submit poems over here. I've been in high prick mode for two years now about this shit.
A real comment, as poetry the best lines are simplest like
I'm not like her.
Not soft, not smooth.
Not anymore
you have much better than average porn description to arrive there, it is a little too larded for poetry's sake. But whatever works for you and your audience is fine with me
5ed
I am a prick about comments, and I get slammed for the easiness of the scores from the poets. Good luck.
Tx is a good and very popular prose writer with a large and loyal fan base. This poem is far from being as bad as many but it ain't that good either. However, I think we should encourage writers like Tex because if only one or two of his fans stop by to read one or two other poems that will be good. Therefore, although personally I don't think his poem is worth a red H, I'm not going to mark it down because the Poetry Board needs all the traffic it can get. And I suspect TX can do better than this so lets encourage both him and his fans.
But Tx: never ever, ever, use the word beauteous! Mark Twain took the mickey out of it so effectively in Huck Finn (tho' It mighta' been Tom Sawyer) that you'll cringe with embarrassment if you read it.Good luck.