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Click hereI want your love to leave its mark on me,
to swallow my selfishness and leave me blind.
I want it to smear my face
and spot my dress
and rearrange my self-esteem.
I want it so deep inside of me
that I feel it in my bones.
I want it to break me down
and leave me squirming in the dirt.
I want your love to hurt.
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I think you could have begged with more passion, less words and
fewer cliches, but you do show some promise nonetheless. Do keep writing. Sweet O.
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