- Erotic Poetry
- I thought about you today
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Click herethought about you today
our trip so many yeas ago
through the lakes country
hills alive with color
mirrored in the lakes
top down on my MGB
you leaning into my shoulder
long golden hair
trying to take flight on the breeze
blue eyes bright, excited
the body warm scent of your perfume,
that tiny inn on the lake
our first time together
your smile, our kiss after
thought about you
didn't want to,
but I did.
Tried to think of someanybodything else,
the house, my book, our kids, TV
but there you were.
interrupting, interfering,
interjecting your shadow.
I missed you today.
Didn't want to,
but I did,
watching leaves falling
with the rain
- COMMENTS
some good, others great all are there. TK U MLJ LV NV
A5, some looks like it is too "catchy" and honestly this is the only part I liked:
interrupting, interfering,
interjecting your shadow.
But I am a very cynical reader.
Two recommendations read: tango and tristess, you may be rewarded. They are both good; accessible, unlike me.
Hello,
JB7, I've been thinking about you, 7 times over here and all that, perhaps I missed, but I have yet to have seen a comment from you on anyone else's. That you for your 5 minutes and that hauntingly familiar refrain.
Still, I do like to see an active involvement.
Did you want me to tell you of the ploys?
What is good, what is bad?
I don't it matters what I have to say, unless it would be something like it touched my heart. Sorry.
I did not vote.