- Erotic Poetry
- Sometimes
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Click hereThere is, sometimes, so much I want to say,
But silence seems the safest path to tread;
My thoughts and feelings won't be led astray
By all those pretty words that should have fled,
When fingers reached to spread around my throat;
With your mouth pressed and pushed against my lips,
The silence wins: you do not have to gloat,
Nor thrust your body right against my hips,
To elicit the soft sounds, you so desire:
The ones that offer welcome as you thrust,
And emphasise your puissance in my fire,
Which adds to your arousal; I adjust
To all that hardness: base and en passant,
That clears to find my path de temps en temps.
- COMMENTS
the form is just a play to be different - need to find more difficult forms maybe. Thank you for your thoughts - it is nice to read and think about verse - makes the change from the next nurse/doctor/consultant visit here - sighs
Outstanding! The ardour, the passion, comes through very strongly! :) :)
But why this particular choice of lines per stanza? Wouldn't three stanzas of four lines each, and a fourth one of two lines, have worked better? Is this a particular sonnet form being followed?
It's good, as we've all come to expect - I'm
tempted to say, somewhat wasted on Lit - but we're really only in the foothills of what you're capable of.
"No words, just deeds,"
Méli pleads.
"Don't talk, use both holes,"
Méli cajoles.
"Use me as your whore,"
Méli wants more.
"Take me up the bum,"
Méli likes to cum.
"Work on my clit,"
Méli really loves it.
"Let me suck your knob,"
Méli loves a blow job.
"Put me over your knee,"
Méli demands of Daddy.
"Spank me till I'm wet,"
Méli's not finished yet.
"Fuck me till I'm sore,"
Méli begs, "j'adore."
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