All Comments on 'Sometimes'

"No words, just deeds,"

Méli pleads.

"Don't talk, use both holes,"

Méli cajoles.

"Use me as your whore,"

Méli wants more.

"Take me up the bum,"

Méli likes to cum.

"Work on my clit,"

Méli really loves it.

"Let me suck your knob,"

Méli loves a blow job.

"Put me over your knee,"

Méli demands of Daddy.

"Spank me till I'm wet,"

Méli's not finished yet.

"Fuck me till I'm sore,"

Méli begs, "j'adore."

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It's good, as we've all come to expect - I'm

tempted to say, somewhat wasted on Lit - but we're really only in the foothills of what you're capable of.

Outstanding! The ardour, the passion, comes through very strongly! :) :)

But why this particular choice of lines per stanza? Wouldn't three stanzas of four lines each, and a fourth one of two lines, have worked better? Is this a particular sonnet form being followed?

the form is just a play to be different - need to find more difficult forms maybe. Thank you for your thoughts - it is nice to read and think about verse - makes the change from the next nurse/doctor/consultant visit here - sighs