- Erotic Poetry
- The Great Pump-Kin
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A bit of seasonal fun for the Literotica Halloween Contest. A playful poke at the site's most popular category as I regale you with the legend of...The Great Pump-Kin.
Tonight I long to feel and see,
To share the love of family.
A lust so strong and love so right,
I yearn for in their arms tonight.
Love the righteous deem forbidden,
forcing us to keep it hidden.
A love for which we've been taught shame,
within us fans that secret flame.
We burn within for those we crave,
those by morality enslaved.
Within them now unleash desire;
and now ignite that inner fire!
Within the one whose love you seek,
desire for whom you dare to speak,
be there but a glowing ember,
spark of need for family member,
that tiny seed is all you need
to nurture lust on which to feed
to quench the thirst of family first,
and scorn the laws of couplings cursed.
The flow'r thus will burst from cover
and each embrace their true lover.
That seed you seek yet can be found,
in this unhallowed tainted ground.
The seed of the unholy gourd
surpasses laws of the false lord.
The root of lust will grow at last
And therefore it shall come to pass
That which is deemed the greatest sin,
through the power of the Great Pump-kin!
- COMMENTS
Sorry. i read it, but I really have no comment except I think your gift is story telling. Hope you will return to share that gift with us.
I think you can sing this to any reel with eight bar phrases, but alas it's only 7 phrases. If it were eight there would be lots of 32 bar and 64 bar tunes to fit it.
I love the pacing and rhythm. It carries it's cadence all the way through. Beautiful use of language. Bravo.
I loved your poem, I have no one to share it with, but if I did i gladly would. My wife would not understand. I enjoy your stories also...
I loved your poem so much that read it numerous times. You're such an awesome poet, Laura.... :) Stella
within us fans a secret flame "
No truer words have been spoken.
Great job, I know this was all in fun, but its actually really good, some good phrasing and a nice rhythm to it. Obviously your title came from the immortal Peanuts special and now I'm thinking Lucy and Linus? Charlie Brown and Sally? Good Grief!