- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Thief's Bucket List
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Click hereThe year Lord Balfour
inked the fate of millions
in three paragraphs
The thief stole upon
a widow dozing in a walled garden
And ignoring supplications
sawed off her proud braids woven with
gold dowry coins
Leaving her destitute. Shamed.
Years after theNakba
he kept a worn list
of his victims
When he encountered
one by chance
he would declare, for example:
Abu Ammar! - I stole a chicken from you in 1917
Allow me to repay you now and atone!
Times were hard. Most accepted.
But in 1967 when Um Walid arrived
The black hem of her dress
bearing dust from the Allenby bridge
she spit on his feet
and damned him to hell
Thus foiling his chances of redemption.
- COMMENTS
Your poem brings to life details from an event which I knew about, but that has happened so far away from me.
And all it was one person to deny him? Harsh.
you make your own, you do well at it, the one lines, noticed the progression
Balfour, not going there. 5ed
and its not good for holding wishes, TK U MLJ LV NV
and so your poem drove me to discoveries. thankyou!
this piece has meat to its bones and reminds me of greenmountaineer's writes - he, and you, introduce some of us to moments in history we were ignorant of. it is hard, and poignant, and poetry worth spending time considering.