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Comparing lover's eyes with pools is a special metaphor. But when we read "everlasting embrace", we will know that are indulge and swimmy the poet wants to express.
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Nice description of looking into those eyes but again, would have been helped by a careful edit.
The eyes are so special...
and you're really captured the various feelings in very descriptive words..
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