All Comments on 'A Bad Influence Ch. 01'

The romantic in me wished the description of her deflowering virgins as a hobby wasn't included.

However, a well crafted and descriptive story.

Thanks

Al ain't got a chance with a wily female like Katie.

Boyd

Lambrini girls just want to get fucked

done. Interesting and fast paced enough. And the sex was hot. Great job.

To my first public commentator and others... I have changed the ending to make Katie a more sympathetic character - I hope you approve.

Vermilion

Having read through the three episodes so far, I am very impressed with their sensuality, and reality of life in early university days, although the progression to anal was possibly a little rapid and improbable. please keep writing more,

I really enjoyed your plot development and the lurid details. Very nice.

Loved the story... hot hot!! Can't wait for my hubby to get home, I'm going to bang his brains out! Oh I am so turned on! Thank you!

...but I'm not a virgin. *Wink* More seriously, I enjoyed this. I think you hit the halting fear of Alistair just right in places: More than 20 years later I still remember the worry that I would somehow fuck this up. I must admit though...I want the original characterization of Katie now. I hope you still have the earlier version.

That was one of the hottest stories I have ever read. Thank you!

One of the best written stories I've read on Literotica. Well done.

I liked this one. Very real.

I like the way you sympathize with your characters, leading the slowly and gently on. You write beautifully.

fantastic story...written by a very knowing woman !!

compliments...couldnot help pulling my cock out and masturbating ..

Wow, Emelia, I usually read men's writing but that was fantastic.

Really great! well written, good story, plenty of action with just enough prelude

In each of my first experiences the tenderness that led to trust and deep bonding was as important as any other part of those relationships. Thank you for telling a tale so well I was quickly and irrevocably reminded of my own coming-of-age!

left me longing for more.Thanks.

This was so amazing make anyone would want to have sex .... :-) although I'm a virgin :-p

Wow, that was hot! I loved it!

Hi, Katie!

Do you travel to Nashville?

I occasionally visit the UK...:+))