All Comments on 'A Dark Closet'
by Apophenia
- 15 Comments
No surprise in the ending but good build up even so. Kinda want to know what’s in it for Paul.
Yum! There should be an imaginary fund to encourage imaginary campus shooters! Like RowanWrites, I would also like to know what Paul is getting out of this...
The rape fantasy is very real...the story(s) are plausable. Definitely enjoyed her helplessness being pinned in close as she was....as a man i could almost feel the urge to shove my hard on deep in a scared horny woman.
You should probably have better than a 4th grade vocabulary if you're going to write about college students. Or maybe not? Have entrance standards fallen that low?
Ignore the mean comments. They just hate because they are not into enjoying the fun part of the story. I loved it. What about Paul?
Oh fuck, your stories are hot. I don't know why you're getting mean comments from people who probably shouldn't be browsing the noncon category anyway. This is well-written.
I really really liked the way he was forceful but also slow and sensual. Being forced into close contact, and then having that contact become sexual has always been a fantasy of mine.
Love the slow surrender and acceptance. My fetish is women like her who give in and just let it happen. It’s the natural order and how it’s supposed to be.. her body responding.
I'll never understand people who make negative comments just because they don't like the genre. It's tagged as non-con, you specifically mention the rate in the disclaimer at the beginning so if anyone kept reading it's their own fault. I love non-con stories like this where the "victim" is secretly enjoying themselves. I like that we see Sarah's side where she kind of doesn't want him to stop
"It’s the natural order" That's a stupid comment.
In every relationship, there is an equal distribution; where the man dominates, where the woman dominates, or both dominate and even where neither dominates.
That's the natural orde!
well-written by yhe way :)