All Comments on 'A Hard Valentine's Day'

This should have been in the group sex not the incest/taboo lol

I actually submitted it in the Group Sex category (I think) but it may have been changed. Glad you enjoyed it regardless!

I loved the plot line and thought it was very erotic, along with being well written and edited.

He deffently has a very loving and sharing wife, and it's lucky to be him.

I'm glad that Heather finally gave up the hatefulness towards him and perhaps he can get more of her fat puffy pussy, along with getting some of Beth's tight pussy.

That's something I'd like to read about. Another go around with the three sisters, and this time for a longer period of time, where he gets to spend the night with each of the girls, and shows them how good he can make them feel.

I really liked the story, thanks for the read.

with a lot of options to go forward. He should certainly have sex with them all again. It can easily fit into either category since the three sisters all had some type of sex with him. Maybe another chapter could have him making love with one of the other sisters while his wife and the third sister have sex on the same bed.

i look forward to reading more.

I wish more family rifts could be solved as simply as that.

Thoroughly enjoyed the story and your writing style. Felt real and comfortable.

Thank you for the great story. Well written and enjoyable to read.

I don't necessarily agree with the idea of more chapters. I know some want the stories to continue and there are a number of ways you could proceed but sometimes, one chapter is enough. You can let the readers imagine their own chapters.

Keep up the good work.

One of the best of any get togethers I have read. Sweet, loving, and even the mean one came around, lol great one for valentines read.

Sooooo gooood!!! Well written! Great job!

This was so awesome!!!!!!! Would love to read more.

BEING A RETIRED SENIOR EDITOR FOR A NATIONWIDE PUBLISHER AND ALSO A POPULAR HUNTING MAGAZINE I HAVE TO SAY THIS WAS AN EXCELLENT STORY! EVERYTHING ABOUT IT WAS TOP OF THE LINE PERFECT WITH JUST ONE EXCEPTION AND IT PUZZLES ME TO THIS DAY. WHAT IS UP WITH THE dot dot dot's IN THESE STORIES? DO AUTHORS NOT USE COMMAS ANY MORE? GREAT STORY. LOVED IT. THANK YOU PONYFITNESS! EXCEPTIONAL EROTIC STORY!

I loved every word! Come back and write more stories for us.

Excellent ad we didn't get the standard, "the women licked each other" scene I would have spread chocolate all over Beth's ass since she said she liked anal