All Comments on 'A MILF, a Young Man, and an Island'
by lct123
- 6 Comments
Nice story about a wife's adventures. What happened the rest of the time on the island?
What happened when she got home and her husband counted condoms he'd spotted before she left? Or when she got home after not bothering with the condoms when she was drinking and she gave her hubby a disease or had another kid. So many possible futures...
Why portray her as some type of saint. She’s just another cheating wife and you have her experience no consequences for her behavior. Nonsense
It was sad and sweet and I knew it complete when I wore a younger man's clothes. A very wonderful story. Please write more.
Nice story, thanks.
I see minor errors in your writing, similar to my own, but the story flows nicely. Only one thing - Joni Mitchell was once advised to “keep something of yourself”. I thought of that when I read this tale. It seems very personal.
PS: Ignore the trolls comments - write what you want, not what they want you to.