All Comments on 'A New Life'

Hope she ends up pregnant that would be a shock for the ex!

Glad you’re back!

First off I’d like to say that it’s good to see you back after a long hiatus and you’re posting new content.

Been a fan of your work ever since I’ve read the Shared pantie series.

That one btw,hit home for me because it blossomed into a real life experience I had with my older sister….but I digress hehe, anyways…….You definitely haven’t lost your touch with This new life :) I have a feeling it’s just gonna be the beginning and even more “fun” is on the way this mother/son in upcoming chapters 🙏🏽

p.s. An older sister added to the mix would be like the proverbial “cherry on top” on a sundae afternoon lol, but you already got the memo as per your previous stories ehh.

p.p.s. blunt & graphic are the best ones to read soooooo, More please ;)

Loved it! Super fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

I find it exciting specially when the son nearly fingered his mother for the first time. But the criticism I have are fucking in public where anybody could see you is already illegal. Doing it incestuously is far more illegal. The ex-husband caught his ex-wife fucking their own son is another big blunder. All those three things will both of them end in jail. Aside from that very unrealistic scene everything is is exciting. Moving forward, the mother could now confess to her son that she saw and perv at her son and his girlfriend fucking and this girlfriend saw her watching and she teased her about it. Would be nice if the girlfriend comes back and reunites with them.

Very nicely written,,,loved this one as well as your other stories,,,,

I really enjoyed this story as well as three others I read. You are very good keep writing more. Incest is my favorite.

Very nice story, Sarah James. Bravo. The theme is not new, but it's always nice to find a slightly different build up to what we know is coming - or do I mean cumming? This is the first story of yours I have seen; now I shall check out your other tales, hoping for a similar rush of blood to the right parts.

A very erotic story from from Amanda locking eyes with mom with Braxton inside her. Sons who've been in a taboo relationship know the extreme of hearing "mommy" at the right time.

Need another part where mom admits that she wasn't on birth control and her home preg test has showed positive. Now the son calls her Lori, as her belly swells with his baby.

Welcome back SJ.

Where have you been all this time?

Women write the best M&S stories.

Thanks for this juicy one!

Can't wait for more.

Just read this story a loved it. It’s now in my favorites with a 5. Would love to read more. I found your older stories and intend to read them soon. I will be watching for more of your stories. Thank you.

I have to say that I did enjoy reading this account, and you certainly got several of the high points right. However there are some issues with it that don't allow it to be a 5.

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While a story that's less than 3 lit pages long is not necessarily something to automatically ding, it can indicate that the story is underdeveloped relative to where it should end up once readers reach the end. That is the case with the story, as one more page would have really helped in terms of presenting a little more of the mom psychology, by showing her having more doubts about coupling with Braxton, or maybe even putting in some other kind of experience they shared, where it really stoked the flames. It's getting to the finish a little too quickly if you know what I mean. What another poster said where somebody could have identified them was definitely a major No-No and a pretty big oversight, because yeah if somebody can say oh well it's Mom and son and they're both stuck. While I certainly like the idea of the mom kind of getting revenge on an obviously unwilling ex, and the trope has been used before, it should have been more carefully employed. Also, it was extremely weak when we're talking about why Amanda broke it off with Braxton--especially when it seemed like you were going to use Amanda as a means to strongly push Lori in the direction to replace her. For example you could have included one more hot episode with Braxton and Amanda, where Amanda knowingly leaves the door open again, catches Lori at it, and then basically stokes Lori's flames higher-- and then maybe discusses that she's going to break up with Braxton and then leave Braxton in Lori's capable hands? That's the whole point here, is more should have been injected to increase the hotness factor of this. The best stories I've seen are when the opposing partner has to overcome all these doubts, or both of them face the doubts together, resolve them, and then decide okay we're going to do this.. and then all the fireworks fly. It doesn't have to necessarily have multiple sex scenes in order for it to be hot; in fact most of the story could be dedicated to setting up that one scene that you're hoping to have where both parties basically see stars when they fuck. So consider maybe holding off the main event a little longer and developing a psychology and overcoming the mutual doubts or obstacles the two would have to basically initiating that relationship. 4

More!

I really enjoyed your story. Please continue. Welcome back. Thanks for sharing.

Very hot 2nd chapter. Please write more about these two. 5 Stars.

Don’t listen to the nay sayers that want a page or to of psychobabble to justify the actions of your characters. You set the stage well and everything about the story is wonderful. 5s

I struggled with this story's rating. I liked it a lot but ... what happened to the girlfriend? She just dropped out of the story and I kept waiting for her to return somehow, in some way. You set her up as a Dom. You set her up as sexually teasing Mom. Then ... nothing. Honestly, I felt the story took the easier road rather than the proper road.

Come on. First fuck and mommy's showing her ex-husband that she is fucking their son. She's telling him her son is the only cock she can get to fuck her pussy. Her ex-husband might have taken some pictures or video to show to the authorities since incest is illegal.

Great story. wouldn't change a thing.

Really enjoyed it, feel genuine and authentic, great job.

You lost me with all the "Mommy" talk. The baby talk sounds so stupid when adults use it.

Loved the story but there was not enough sex and it was to short still gave it 5 stars and hope you continue with more

This needs far more character development, a longer and slower build up, and while the reader may understand it's complete fantasy, it has to be more believable.

Good story, maybe Braxton actually dump Amanda for his mother after Amanda told him about her watching, Braxton really wanted his mother. We need chapter 2 please

Absolutely loved this one ❤

Dislike, only for stupidity. When she discovered her EX in the restaurant she would have behaved like the mother that she was. Her EX logically had an ax to grind with her (all EXes do)

So to even consider getting randy in the parking lot (or alley) next to the restaurant is insane.

Knowing that incest is illegal her EX could take a photo and call the cops.

THINKing would prevent many problems.

Then, along the THINKING lines there is unwanted pregnancy. After 3 years of abstinence we can presume that she was no longer on the pill.........Enough said.

Could be a good story but THINK..................

This is an enjoyable read , those crtics must realize this is a story not a blow by blow of actual happenings. In reality a mom would not be so quick to jump between the sheets with her son.

Of course that is only my opinion maybe I'm wrong.

You most definitely need to write the next chapter of this story.

PLEASE PLEASE

This story would have been the fulfillment of my teen dreams.Very exciting. Thanks!!

Damn!

Damn!

Damn!

I love the way you write! I read your stories chronologically by release, just because and I love them all!

But my favorite, if I had to pick, is the "New" encounters as opposed to stories that go for many chapters.