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You have a gift for conjuring story plots. Your writing is clean, not riddled with glaring typos and grammatical errors. You need time to develop your craft, WW. Just remember, YOU are the only one who can hold you back from improving and growing as a writer. I sincerely like this story and think it's clever. It's a classic short-story and leaves your readers wanting to read more. Congrats! Well done!
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A bored house with a nasty mind and a penchant for writing my fantasies. Most involve revenge on a cheating spouse, a cruel boyfriend/husband, a demanding employer, or a woman who hurt someone. Other wanderings of mind include public sex, instant attractions followed by nasty ...
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