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Click here"So, go on fuck that cock, I know you want to." Jason had to steel his resolve against those narrowing hazel eyes. "Know this," he said pushing his face into hers as the handcuffs became taut. "You will have to rape your own son are you truly willing to go that far," Jason said hoping she didn't call my bluff. "I can't stop you from taking this body," rattling the cuffs to prove his point. "But know this my will, will not be broken not by you, not by Margret so have your fun while you can."
Then Mara did something Jason prayed she would never do. Her hand grasping the back of his neck to keep him from seeing what she was about to do. Jason eyes went wide as he felt his sensitive head pressing against her channel. How desperately he didn't want to enjoy the sensation of her walls, as they tightened around his shaft as she sank his rod deeper into her body.
"I can feel you so deep baby," Mara said breathing heavily as she slowly picked up her pace. "It's okay Jason enjoy it, it's not wrong to want your mother to make you feel good," she said looking deep into her son's eyes.
"Fuck you Mara!" Jason said falling backwards. "The only one here that's enjoying this is you!" God. How Jason wished he could believe his own lie. Yet he couldn't, not when her folds closed around his cock. Massaging his rod in ways that his hand could never hope to achieve. Biting back his howl of pain as she dragged her nail's down his chest drawing rivets of blood.
"Jason," Mara said through pleasure filled moans. "You shouldn't make me angry, not when I know your cock loves being in my cunt. I can feel it swelling ready to burst." As much as Jason wanted to deny it yet she was right. He was about to cum. Jason just had to think of a way not to give her what she wanted. As if she could read his mind her hips quickened Jason's cock glistened in her hot slick juices as her cream flowed down his rod with each thrust.
"Fuck! Fuck! Fuck!" Jason screamed as he felt the tingling of his balls knowing my climax was nigh.
"That's it baby," Mara said leaning across his chest. How Jason loved the feel of her breasts as her nipples dragged along his skin. As she glided along his member, her tongue flickering out teasing Jason's lips. Before embracing them like she owned them. "Fuck Jason!" she moaned into my mouth. "My pussy loves that young cock filling me to the hilt," she said pushing herself up so that she could feel her son's hot seed shooting deep into her womb. "Now fill you mother's cunt with that youthful cum. That I know is just waiting to erupt from that magnificent cock."
"Fucking god damn," Jason moaned as his balls emptied into his mother.
"See was that so bad baby?" Mara asked as his cock slid out of her tight hot hole. "Next time I'll teach you how to please your Mistress," she said feeling her son's cum leaking out of her.
"You can shove that crap up your ass Mara there won't be a next time," Jason spat, yet he could feel the embers stirring in his groin. "Why the fuck is this shit turning me on?" Jason asked himself. Again, his mind couldn't give him no answers to his growing questions.
"Have you forgotten Jason, you are still at my mercy," Mara said leaning on her arm smiling cruelly. Jason kind of did why had he forgotten that simple fact? "I told you Jason I was going to fuck you, and fuck you, and fuck you until you submit to your Mistress," she said her fingers walking across his chest.
"Mistress," Margret said from Jason's doorway. Wearing nothing more than a black lace teddy, her body on display for her bother to view at his heart's desire. "Then may I be of assistance to you," she had lain awake all night waiting for this moment.
"What a most delicious idea!"
To be continued.
- COMMENTS
Forget what the haters say. It's your story tell it the way you want. You don't need to explain the characters thoughts and reasons to anyone. Plus if they think they can do better let them. Keep posting. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Oh may! What hot story. Love how Jason is dealing with his family. I don't think I'd be able to do that. I'd have my throbbing cock so in my sister's holes. I'd love to see him turn into Dom and turn his into his slave.
I am severely confused by the character of Jason, as a millionaire author over the age of eighteen, who is aware of the lifestyle of his parents and sibling, why the hell would he remain in his parents house.
It’s a nice premise but the logic as to why Jason is still living at home makes no sense lmao
There’s one thing that makes none of it work: Jason doesn’t need to graduate to move out. He has the money to support himself, and is of age to sign contracts. A person as bright as he is, would have had his bags packed and be out the door, upon signing his contract.
The incongruity in this character is annoying he is a genius who's been reading and then writing successfully and has grown his wealth and power in high school for several years under his families nose, they are neglectful and his fathers is emotionally abusive, he hates them and knows about their lifestyle, but right after he reveals who he is and his money he doesn't realize, and didn't expect his sister and mother to try and control him?! Why doesn't such a brilliant yet discreet individual get caught off guard when the incestuos gold diggers start making moves directly after hearing about all his success!?!?!?
I normally love your work I only made it to the ride home from the restaurant. I was pulling my hair out that he agreed to take them. If he's 18 and a millionaire why does he have to live at home at all??? I know it's for the story and all that, I get it. But come on!! I should have known better. I had an idea going in that this would involve manipulation and coercion which are big turn offs for me, but I love your work so I had to try.
So he gets his older used up whore of a mother and his sister that his old ass father has been fucking. Wow if I was Jason and felt as he did I would have told Mara to go fuck herself and then sis that I wouldn't touch a disgusting slut like her when I saw old dad fingering her in the car. Sorry but knowing that Jack has been fucking sis for three years turns me off to her character and moms a psycho bitch and they only are interested in his money and mom wants the challenge of breaking him. Sorry but your main female characters are written to be disposable and quickly forgotten. I hope you bring in a better female lead for jason or he will just be left with sloppy seconds he will have to share with his old dad.
I enjoy this concept and I see how you're trying to develop it. There was a few problems with switching between First and Third person narration but it was still readable. I intend to finish the series, so thanks for writing!
So he was disgusted by their behavior during three years, but in a few hours he becomes aroused by it?
So the boy has known for a long time that his mom is a Mistress and her dad and sister slaves, and in the restaurant he doesn't see that she will try to make him her slave?
So he's so naïve that he can't see that his sister is acting on his mom's instructions, or to believe that his mom won't try to break him in order to have access to his money?
He is already of age and has money. Nobody is preventing him from simply leaving them at the house and drive to a hotel to wait out the five months before leaving forever.
Help is one 911-call away.
The last part simply contradicts everything we're told in the first part about the boy's character. Sorry but suspension of disbelief is too much here.
I like the premise of the story. I’m interested to see where you take it. I don’t normally say this, but I’m having a hard time reading this story with all the spelling and grammar problems. I’m not complaining, it’s just a little hard to read for me.
I love the original idea. This has me wanting to read more and more after every sentence. Of course I see people complaining on the grammar. I personally have the intelligence to be able to read through it without a problem. but it seems to others that it ruins the story because you mistyped one of who knows how many words in the chapter. Keep up the good work
I'm running out of adjectives to describe your stories. I can tell this is going to be another rollercoaster ride. With all of his money couldn't he have left home already? If course then there would be a story. I can't wait to start the next part.
Just letting you all know an updated version has been uploaded and should appear in a couple of days.
Not one bit. But do go or stay matters little to me what you do, John.
Just one of SEVERAL who have either suggested or flat out t told you that you need an editor
You seem to be hung upon the fact that none of us have ever published anything here on LIT
But I guarantee you I’ve written a bunch If I had ever turned in anything written like this in Jr High, Senior High or English Comp I’d have gotten a failing grade
And if I ever wrote like this in my processional capacity, I’d have been standing tall in front of my boss, listening to him/her tell me exactly why I would never, EVER , embarrass them like that again
My offer was in response to your comment that your couldn’t get a hold of any of the Lit volunteer editors I think what probably happened was that you DID, and responded to them the way that you responded here, and they said “I don’t need this shit” and stopped responding to you
I’ll probably go ahead and finish this story simply to see how you work things out, but I probably wont fight your writing to read anything else of yours
I know that is gonna break your heart, right?
Where have we been? Reading OTHER authors, most of who actually know how to
use the English Language. Your story itself is interesting,but the execution sucks
Until Lit recently suggested this story as a "you might also like" link, I'd never heard of you
I'll offer to edit for you, if you'll unbend far enough to accept
Not necessarily a GOOD editor, mind you
Just a run-of-the-mill editor would do wonders for readability
Alright... funny wasn't what I was going for, but glad you got some enjoyment Desired.
Yeah, and your point is? The story is over a damn year old where have you been?
Another writer that doesn't know the diference between "to" and "too".
A good story so far
Switching between first and third person can be a bit disconcerting, especially in the middle of a paragraph
I am a little late to the party, so my opinion at this point doesn't mean much, but as I read future I can see that Jason (at least at this point) is a lost cause. I think it would have been a much hotter story if He can completely turn the tables on his mother.
That being said, I did enjoy this chapter and looking forward to reading the others
Yea I'm working on it but editors are a pain to get a hold of it's the reason part two isn't out yet.
a good story and I too am enjoying him resisting her. I do hope he is able to turn the table on them all. There are errors in word usage, multiple editors will help with this problem since I've seen even using an editor usually means there's still errors since our mind fill in the errors. I have written and do write stories, so I'm just giving you some helpful advice.
Hello everyone thanks for reading my story. Part two will be out soon or as soon as I can find an editor that answers their email. Just to give y'all a head's up.
I am not a big aficionado of domination, humiliation, and submission, except in certain instances. However in this story, I am liking the idea that Jason is fighting his dominating mother on this.
He is so disappointed in his cock responding to her sexually forcing him, when he needs to use this to his advantage. He needs to enjoy the act and let the cunt know that he is enjoying it. The catch is that he needs to fantasize about someone else and call out their name as he orgasms or is getting excited. His agent seems to have caught his eye earlier, so she could be used to torment his raping mother. How eager will she be, if she or her slut daughter give him pleasure, and then he makes them think he is thinking about someone else that they have no control over.
Just a thought soul71.
Now, a comment on your writing skills. I will never insult you for your English, grammer, and punctuation skills. For one thing, I have not posted a story yet my self, like some of your VERY RUDE commenters, and I salute you for your effort. If they feel your writing is so bad and makes reading your story so difficult, maybe they should just move their pompous, self-agrandizing selves on down the road. Especially the cowards that are ANONYMOUS!
However, that doesn't mean that you couldn't improve your stories by using an editor of some kind. There are folks here on Literotica that will volunteer to edit stories. Since I have never used one, I can't speak for their effectiveness, or what they "charge" for their services. I would expect to give an editing credit to them at the beginning of the story, at the very least, and depending on how far they go in editing, possibly including them as a co-author.
Keep writing, as I said, I am enjoying this story!
Seriously...find an editor. Your (not you're) punctuation and grammer are very poor, which detracts greatly from a very good story line and some great imagery.
Thank you for this, there is a lack of these type of stories and I hope you will continue writing them. Great job!
There is so much to do in the next chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Really great start! Please don't ruin it by making him give in too soon, hell even don't make him give in.
Have him use his knowledge as a fantasy writer to turn he tables on them and have his mom and sister as his slaves!
Take you time.
The story is fantastic, but mabey you should re read over the story before you publish it. Make sure all the grammar is correct and all the spelling is correct too.
Other than that, I like it!
Not a bad start. Here's hoping the son will turn the tables...