by Bramblethorn
Another wonderful chapter! This was absolutely mesmerizing ... and I cannot wait for more. Please hurry with your next chapter? I'm asking nicely? *sweet smile* ~ L
I really like your style. :) A good mix of slow and fast, and very descriptive.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Oh god, i love this story! you have me hooked. I can't wait to see how their relationship develops.
keep up the good work.
your writing style is awesome.
I love the characters and your pacing is perfect. Please keep writing!
Lovely story, great to see another good Aussie writer. Can't wait to see what happens next. Very beautiful style.
Can't wait for the rest of the story. Love your style of writing I feel so involved with the characters. I'm glad I stumbled across your stories, definitely one of my favorite authors. Keep them coming.
so beautiful - I have those little pictures filling my head. Thank you <3
So happy that I came across your work!!! <3 You've just gained a huge fan! and i'm not even finished yet!
...and gets sex between women just right. Thank you for such beautiful, quality work. It's a joy to read it!
Wow. My partner and I used to have sex like this. Reading this story makes me long for it more than ever. Perfectly written.
This is the type of erotic LITERATURE I crave. I'm so thankful for skilled authors like you, Mr/Ms. Bramblethorn.
Wow, I loved this one so much! thank you for sharing it with us!
Good balanced saving for yvonnes rollercoasters the evening before at the Christmas party