All Comments on 'A Waking Nightmare'

This is good tale that could easily been told with broader views and better imagery. Use a thesaurus regularly to find appropriate synonyms, That said, you have done a fine job of portraying a "haunting" from the spirit's point of view.

I enjoy a good scare and the imagery was exceptional, but the tone was too dark for me to really like this tale. I need Justice and mercy balanced to give the last gold star. SecondCircle is a good writer and has potential to be fantastic.