All Comments on 'After School with Emily'
by TheRedZone
- 10 Comments
It was an "ok" fuck story, but it lacked any kind personality. If their was a category that catered to fucking a hole in the wall, I'd have given you a "5."
Y do so many people rush stories on here. With stories like these it's hard to believe that would ever happen just like that. Where's the build up, the tension and so on. Just not believeable at all.
I think more details and adding more relationship information would make this story even better. The sex was good and now that he knows his sister has tried to entice him, now he has her wanting this and they should do it together from making out to sex play and hard sex next time when their parents are away. His cumming in her butt was the right thing to do. Next time, he can cum in her mouth and/or all over her ??? Thanks.
Totally unrealistic. No character development.
Hi, I'm your big brother. I'm going to fuck you now in your pussy and your ass. Oh really? OK. That would be nice. Thank you. Incidentally what is your name?
Total trash.
A good story would of had a character build up and would show the struggle of the taboo act between them. And why does all the spelling seem terrible. Commas after punctuation and random spaces and misspelling. Not a good story.
No way would he pull out just shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy
FOR BROTHER and SISTER, IT WAS NOT BAD.
....THANKS....
Good story. The thing dreams are made of, but we know most likely won't happen