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Click here"Damn, Carli, that was...well...powerful...amazing...I mean...fuck..." Paula whispered.
I giggled and pulled her into a tighter embrace. "That was the whole idea. I didn't intend to..." I said.
"Don't you fucking apologize. Just say you're welcome." she cut me off, sounding almost angry.
"Ok, you are more than welcome." I replied.
Paula let out a long and labored sigh, indicating how spent she was from our extended play. "I am really wiped out." she admitted.
"Well let's get you into bed, and I mean by yourself." I said, pulling her upright.
I helped her to the queen sized bed in the guest room where she had slept so many times before, and once her head hit the pillow she was out immediately. Smiling as I closed the door, I headed to my own room to take care of my own needs, and fell asleep soon after.
- COMMENTS
Just gets better and better! A slow but very satisfying build up! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Thank you
I read it slowly like it was a fine wine. A super hot incredibly intense wine. That couch scene. Omg. 🔥🔥🔥❤️❤️❤️
I really like your story. Yeah, the drugging may be a bad idea, but despite that there is a lot of genuine feelings and sweetness in the character’s motives.
"The main character had nothing to do with whatever got slipped to her friend, and it's her guess that ecstasy was what she had ingested. In fact, she pretty much rescued her from whoever did it, who wax probably waiting for an opportune moment. I guess I see it as Paula being stripped of her inhibitions and acting on repressed feelings."
That's not how being under the influence works. "Stripped of inhibitions or repressed feelings" does not hold up in the court of law. Ecstasy or not she was under the influence. Carli should have said, "No!"
Well said. Paula’s was clearly relaxed, uninhibited, and turned on by watching the two ladies at the club. That adds up to a willingness to explore with her very best friend.
The main character had nothing to do with whatever got slipped to her friend, and it's her guess that ecstasy was what she had ingested. In fact, she pretty much rescued her from whoever did it, who wax probably waiting for an opportune moment. I guess I see it as Paula being stripped of her inhibitions and acting on repressed feelings.
You are have a knack for writing stories and to make it sensual and erotic. One things that's make me a bit uneasy is that you always look up the border in what is non- or consensual seduction. As you would just make any woman (especially straight woman) 'turn to love sapphic love' if you try hard and long enough, and that results automatically in a happy end. If i would swap the seductress into a man, 'like making a lesbian fall for heterosexual sex by pursuing her' then these stories (as a woman myself) feel somewhat questionable and not so likeable at all. Can your characters just not talk about it, be open about their feelings instead of always manipulating things or taking advantage of their situation/position? Actually, here the 'taking advantage' is still understandable, knowing Carli had a crush on her for forever, but in your other stories it seems more manipulative, well planned. Just, wanted to say these thoughts pop-up whenever reading your stories, but I guess you get a thrill out of this.
Enjoyed that, The attention to detail is awesome. Interested to know how you will frame the conversation in the morning and how the storyline is now going to unfold. If this was real life then the future would have one of two outcomes, Paula would call off the weding and move in with Carli or she would go through with wedding and eventually have an affair with Carli which would destroy the marriage in time. But this is a work of fiction so anything is possible. Five stars
That was such a lovely seduction and just plain love story. Paula has fallen into a quandary. I hope something good comes out of this.
Alferdog,
"Carli spiked her drink and eliminated Paula’s ability to consent? That’s a different story than the one I read."
It does not say she did but she knew her friend was under the influence. She could have stopped but did not.
I have to agree, the Ecstasy put a huge “damper” on things. Not sure why you felt it was necessary other than Carli was responsible, which ruins even more what should have been a beautiful experience/scene for the reader :-(
Carli spiked her drink and eliminated Paula’s ability to consent? That’s a different story than the one I read.
I binged all three parts of this series today, and now I am reading your others. Amazing chemistry, tension, and release. I already recommended it to a few of my girlfriends.
Wish you had left out the ecstasy…makes it feel less than consensual and I don’t feel like it a was a necessary detail. Food for thought!