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- Amy Downstairs
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by litpervgrrl
- 16 Comments
Absolutely and without doubt the best story I've read in a LONG time....
Please keep them going.
Whew.... sooooo Hot....
Totally delicious Andrea. Well-written, nice gentle build-up, fairly credible, and the most delicious sex. More please!
This is an excellent super hot fantasy! This story is well written and the vivid sex is amazing! Wonderful job!
This was great! Playing out a fantasy of most men (one of mine of course), and doing it so well.
This is the best story I have read for ages,it was awesome,I think I will change my name to Amy,I am soaking wet down below.
Luv Jenny Cook
Characterization, plotting, dialogue, grammar and above all of course the dick-stiffening SEX. It was written like you were describing it as it was happening to you in real-time! One could almost hear the suction as the cock slid in and out.
But why am I typing this when you have all those other stories I have to enjoy! ;)
In twenty-one years of reading manuscripts at a not-so-small publishing house your method of characterization, pacing, phrasing, dialogue-exposition exchange, and overall storytelling is a breath of fresh air and, in my opinion, puts you in the 99th percentile of today's new writers. One can never be certain, but if you have not tried your hand at more "mainstream" fiction, then I highly recommend that you give it a go - your talent is apparent. With this being said, please do not stop writing erotica. This story is engaging, sexy, hot, and captures the “innocence lost” quality better than any since reading (Anne Rice as) A. N. Roquelaure (but with a better since of humor) twenty years ago.