by ruetheben
I completely missed an appointment this morning because I was so caught up in this story. Totally worth it. Totally. Wow!
I've been following this story for weeks. It's an interesting love story. Let the experiment begin.
One of the best written, touching and most erotic stories I have ever read! Please write more!!
I love this story but there was an undertone in this chapter that I didn’t like. These two are super close and know so much about each other, share a history, and love each other deeply. Yet Zane chooses to lie about a hugely significant event between them (yet tells his rando co-worker about it), And Khalid refuses to bring it up and have an honest conversation when he thinks Zane doesn’t remember - so they both just pretend it didn’t happen. Then when it finally comes out and they have another round of sex, they both still dance around each other with vague conversation, each choosing to protect themselves versus being completely open and honest with the other about how they feel and what they want. It seemed dishonest - and very frustrating!! Maybe if they were more casual friends, but given their closeness it was off-putting. Gladly by the end (though it was painful to endure as a reader), they have decided to give this experiment a try. I hope for a HEA for them.
Sooo nice now that they're willing to explore a deeper relationship - well written, Rue!! Thank you!!