- Mature
- Average Joe Ch. 02
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Click hereI told him that I would go in the house and leave him alone. I mentioned that I didn't usually let anyone see me in a two piece bathing suit. I was a little old and overweight to be seen in public in it.
He told me that he thought I looked beautiful and that he wouldn't bother me and that I should go ahead and get some sun. The funny thing is that I think he was serious. I missed being complemented like that. I decided to stay out and get a few rays. Joey offered to put some lotion on my back so I wouldn't burn. I turned over onto my tummy.
I can't believe I let him but for some reason I had feelings for this young man. He took the tube of lotion and began rubbing it on my shoulders and back. Just the touch of his hand on me, aroused me. It's been so long since anyone has touched me. I closed my eyes as his soft hands rubbed my back.
When he got to my bra strap I asked him to undo it. I could feel his nervous hands unsnapping my top and then his hands began to rub the lotion on. When he asked if I wanted my legs done, I said, "yes".
He told me again how beautiful and soft I was. I glanced back and saw how hard he was getting. I couldn't believe that me, Mary Wilson could turn on a nice young man like this. He stopped quickly and got in the pool. I figured it was to hide his excitement.
I laid there with the warm sun on my back thinking of sex. Would it be so wrong to have sex with this young man? He was over eighteen and I was an unattached woman.
I asked Joey if he would put more lotion on me. I turned over holding my top against me. He rubbed the lotion on my shoulders and I let my top slip down some. I could feel him getting nervous and saw he was getting hard again.
I reached out and rubbed the large lump in his pants. I think it surprised both of us. I continued to pull his cock out of his swim trunks. He told me no woman has ever touched him before. I took hold of his cock and started stroking it. It was only about a minute when he came all over my breasts and tummy.
He apologized and said he had never been with a woman. I knew right then what I was going to do. I asked him if he would have sex with me. He was very nervous and said he wasn't sure what to do but he wanted to please me.
I told him I would show him how to please a woman and in turn I would please him. I let him know that it wasn't about love, even though if he was a lot older it might have been different. It was about learning about sex and how to satisfy each other.
"Joey, you must promise me that you will never tell anyone about us. I will show you how to please a woman and you will know what women like. Someday you will find the woman of your dreams and will know how to please her.
"I don't know how long we will have sex together. You will find a young woman someday. The weekends that Nancy is with her dad, we can be together. Again, you must promise that you will tell no one."
He promised and we got in the pool to rinse off. His hands were all over my breasts. After cleaning his cum off of me we went up to his apartment. He was such a nice man, so young and innocent. He had never been with a woman and had never experienced the joys of sex. I wanted to change all that for him and in the process, he brought me out of my shell.
Too bad we had such an age difference. I know most people wouldn't have understood. Hopefully he will find the right woman and I may find someone more of my generation.
We were only together for a few months but it changed both of our lives forever.
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Thank you for reading my story. I'll be posting chapter 3 soon.
Comments are welcome and appreciated
DG Hear
- COMMENTS
Well, it's obvious why you didn't make this "First Time", since there Still isn't any sex.
And that's Not a Complaint!
The first two chapters have been background for the MC and... other MC?
*goes back to author page and views full chapter summary*
No, Mary isn't listed at the end, we have Ariel, instead.
Ok, with all the info in the chapter blurbs, it becomes clear that Mary's extensive background (an entire chapter, despite the fact that she's not the MC) is just to give you a way to teach Joe to be much better than average in pleasing Ariel, who he obviously is going to be with, given you end the story with her.
So, almost half of the 7 chapter story to get to a point where you can justify 'Average Joe' not being 'Average'?
Dude, this is a novella, not a disparate series of episodes, told in self-contained chapters, that can be tagged as appropriate.
The key here is the tagging, which you do not seem to understand.
CH 1 is most definitely not a First Time, CH 2 is entirely background material containing one cheating sex scene and is in no way a Mature Sex story.
It is, as CH 1, Non Erotic.
I get why you didn't tag them appropriately; Non Erotic chapters don't draw a lot of attention. But you'd have been so much better off with Novels and Novellas for a tag. Better even than putting a disclaimer that the first two thirds of the chapter are for background.
Either that, or dump CH's 1-3 into a single chapter, tag it First Time (I do hope they figure out tab A and slot B in CH 3 or I'm gonna go do my hair) and... well, we'll see what happens in 4-7.
One positive: I've invested a lot of time here, and that's because you DID do a good job at one thing: Character Building.
Now, the question is will you do plot, story, character development, setting and/or... just for grins as it is a sex story, some erotica of some form or another?
The negative: These two chapters, while containing necessary background for the story as a whole, are not viable 'chapters' to qualify by your rosa-blanca.ru. Why rehash this info? Because this dropped the 4 you got for CH 1 to a 3 for the total lack of viable story content in CH 2.
Character Background is Not complete content for a chapter of an erotic story that is tagged as such.
I enjoyed the change in narration. We now have good character development for Mary and Joe.
One suggestion though. Please have your editor/editors check for the proper use of compliment versus complement. The words are quite different and often misused here on Lit.
Thanks again for a good effort which I'm enjoying.
Good down home sex. Best watch ol' Mary if she has a hot pot of spaghetti handy, though. Good change of narrator and perfect continuity. DG is a trustworthy source for good dirty fun. But of course I cannot let him go without some quibbles, via "Send Feedback.".
The first chapter was really good. I'll admit that with the opening of this chapter, and the shift in story-teller perspective, I was not optimistic about how the chapter would turn out. But actually, it turns out to be a very entertaining work. Definitley, I'm looking forward to Ch.03.
DG, thanks for all of your excellent stories. I am not 100% sure of how they are properly used, but you might want to research the proper usage of "lie, lay, lain, and laid."
For example, when you wrote "I laid there with the warm sun...." I think it should actually be "I lay there with the warm sun...."
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I really enjoy the way you are building this tale DG. It shows what a gifted author you are. Please keep up the good work.
Story is just beginning to unfold. Please give it a chance. I wanted you to get to know a little about the characters and what happened in their lives. Next chapter they head up to the apartment but that's just the beginning. Thanks for for taking the time to read and comment.
I decided to go ahead and submit a chapter a day till all seven are posted.
DG
Nice to read the story from the point of view of the woman. Thanks DG