All Comments on 'BabySitter Edgy'
by Ashson
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This is why I love reading your stories. You make me cum Everytime. I am so wet I can not stop it!!!
Keep writing. You should write a novel. You would definitely be better than 50 shades of grey.
You are using the same line again and again in many of your stories. "The sister" promised to sit or "The friend" promised and it's old. I stopped reading as soon as I saw that line...younger sister made the committement and older sister had to honor it.
There a 100 other ways you could start this off with the why a female just HAD to babysit so why start with that repetitive nonsense?
You've got your niche; all your stories are babysitting stories where the girl is forced or sleeping raping or what have you. Their all the same situations so why not switch it up a bit?
I was hoping to see a change in your stories, but for the life of me I haven't found any yet and it's become redundant.
Not trying to be mean, but I could go back through all of your stories and copy and paste the amount of times you've used the same line. I KNOW you have an imagination. Please, use it.
It's just become boring.