All Comments on 'Brady Family Tent Swap Pt. 02'
by CB_Grl_Dani
- 4 Comments
I find it hard to believe that no one in this family really knows anyone. No one seems sensitive to anyone else's needs. No one seems to care if they get pregnant. No one seems to care for the feelings of the other. Story is good unfortunately the characters are not.
Great story but a slight mess up in the second paragraph from the bottom of this Chapter. Brenda returning from her hike, lol. It's supposed to be Tammy cause Brenda just got fucked anally by her son and has dozed off. No worries, it happens to the best of us. Poor Bill, lol....
Oooohhhh, yeah...the family DRAMA of it all...daddy is left out, while son has mom and sister...
Tammy is gonna whup her momma's butt, messing with "Her Davey"!! This is going to get really interesting...
Five**5**Stars...even though you still have some GLARINGLY Obvious issues with grammar, etc...still have the ability to go back and proofread/correct this for "future generations of readers"!!