All Comments on 'Branded-XXX: The Cigar Girl'

Gotta say, one of the most unusual stories I ever read. Once Greta vanished, things went a little downhill, or at least, sideways.

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Oh my God, that's a very sexy story. Did you ever see Mistress Greta again?

jleetechie- thanks for your comment! I think the protagonist would agree with you.

For sheer perversity, this narrative is right up there with the stories of Jaydean409 and CindysBob. By the end of page 1, I was wondering what ever became of the narrator's graduate studies (which is how he got involved with Greta). I was pleased to see the subject reintroduced later in the tale.

I especially like how the tale captured the MC's gradual drift from social equality (with Greta) to subservience to slavery role-playing to genuine slavery including unpaid prostitution. And, correspondingly, his gradual drift from heterosexual to exclusively homosexual sex.

I like the character Greta. Her personality does remind me of some Dutch people I know. The singing and Bible-quoting felon Grimes has somewhat more complexity than most Black men in porn stories do--though he has the huge penis that Literotica apparently absolutely requires in all Black male characters. The story's literary style is pretty good, though again I'll delicately suggest that a proofreader in addition to the author will do any story no harm and some good. Rounding to the nearest integer, I'm rating this story as 5*.

There is a reason I love Sir Cleveland: he is astute and a literary rocket scientist. Yes, his criticisms are right on point.

If I had a good-looking proofreader, I'm sure I'd get proof, which is what men of my age are looking for. He has mentioned this before, and I should take his suggestion before I am stored underground.

As for penis length, our protagonist is a typical 6 inches, dwarfed by the black Master. (A real person) I’ve known black individuals with various penis sizes, but they are generally "general-sized." The few with tiny penises walk around the locker room with their hands covering their shortcomings. Why God gave big dicks to black people, I can only guess it was to put white folks in their places.

How generous of Sir Peter is to rate my humble story so highly. A lot of effort goes into these stories, and strangely, some tales that I thought were well-written did not appeal to the readers. This was my first S&M story. Readers seemed most excited by incest, "Johny fucked Mommy" and "A Tranny Fanny." Maybe the key to success is a title that rhymes? "

Thanks again to Sir Cleveland, whose superb stories are found in Literotica. I wish I had his talent, but his friendship is invaluable.

A disturbing story but a good read nonetheless. In many BDSM stories I read, the submissive is already property and simply describes how they are used. In others, a normal person instantly becomes submissive without a lot of explanation. So it was interesting to follow the narrator's introduction and fall into the lifestyle.

The process sounded similar to an interview I heard with a woman who escaped forced prostitution except that her groomer never had sex with her. He only took care of her and acted like a friend until she turned eighteen, at which time he turned over to her new owner.

I'm glad the narrator was able to get out of that situation. Scary to know that things like that happen to people all the time. I won't go on and on about it. Thanks for the story.

Thanks for your comments. Only Happy has a selection of very sexy stories that I encourage readers to examine, keeping your Kleenex or towel handy should containment be impossible.