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by nikki_2021
- 16 Comments
Nikki, I always enjoy your tales. This one was good, but I wish there had been more of it.
Please write more, I wanna see the rest of the camping trip!
Great story its too bad you never added more to it but it's still a great trip. It's nice to see how much your writing evolved and improved over the years. It's a shame the men in all your stories only last a minute when having sex, Its a bit unrealistic except for youngsters lol. I think it would be nice if you stretched it out a bit more and make your male characters work to get there partners off. I'm not sure about other men but If I am with a beautiful woman no way will I let it end with out wringing every ounce of pleasure I can out of my partner. Because if it's good they might come back for more ;) Thanks this story was fun because I love camping and river boating I just wish I had an April to cum with.
April's something else, Dave a bit passive but highly appreciatove.
Your story clearly shows that you have seldom been in a canoe or been camping. That tree back would have cut her front to ribbons.
A good story rests entirely on credibility. I'm afraid you lost me early on.
Thank you for sharing a fantastic story! I look forward to reading more of your stories! (It is funny that some commentators forget that this a wonderful little fantasy world. I am curious if they actually write anything!)
This was a great story and I gave it 5 stars. I wonder if Phil and May know about April fucking Dave. I know they like Dave but would they mind if he was fucking April? It was a really nice story of two young people fucking in the wilderness. I loved the story and wonder what happens tomorrow on their second canoe trip.
Well done & fun.
At least 15 years old going by the comments.
I guess there will be no second chapter.
Bill S.
NIKKI, SINCE YOU HAVE MORE FOLLOWERS THAN MOST AUTHORS HAVE READERS, THERE IS LITTLE WONDER WHY I HAVE LIKED YOU SO LONG. CINCO ESTRELLAS ALWAYS. CHEERS!