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Click hereMy eyes were wide, my hands falling to my sides, covered in semen from the last two guys who had come on me. I looked around the circle and then, when one of the men shifted, I saw Jess standing in the doorway of the kitchen. His eyes met mine and he grinned, winking at me.
The first spurt of semen landed across my breasts, the hot fluid running down the soft mounds to pool in the valley of my cleavage. The second landed on my thighs, which were still spread, the creamy white stuff trailing over my barely covered mound. I closed my eyes as the next shot landed across my face. Then they were coming, all of them, shooting their cream onto my naked body.
I was covered with jism. It was hot and gooey, a little slimy against my body. It mixed with the juice from the fruit and the syrup and the melted chocolate, pooling in my navel, dripping off my thighs, matting in my hair. I felt the last shot land across my mouth to the accompaniment of some hoarse male laughter and then felt them move away from the tray.
I couldn't open my eyes. I could only lay there in the quickly cooling pool of semen, listening as the men talked, hearing lighters click and smelling the scent of cigar smoke. I couldn't stand up, I couldn't move off the tray because the come had made the tray ultra slippery. I was about to open my mouth, to ask for help, when he spoke above my head.
"It's okay, Stephanie. You did great."
"Jess?" I asked. "Can you get me out of here and off this tray?"
"Yes ma'am, right away."
I felt the cart begin to move and heard the swinging doors into the kitchen.
"Amazing," Chef Pierre said. "Simply amazing." He clapped his hands enthusiastically.
"Can you sit up?"
I managed, feeling the gooey stuff dripping off of me. Something was placed in my hands, a wet cloth, and I used it to wipe away the worst of it out of my eyes and off my face. "I can't go home like this."
"No one expects you to, Stephanie," Jess said. He held a small wire basket and I could see my clothes inside. He held out his hand to me and I took it, wanting to apologize for the mess I made of it. "I'm going to take you to where you can get a shower."
"Thank you," I said, standing still for a moment and letting my knees lose their shakiness. I'd been more affected by what had happened out there than I thought. My body tingled, my pussy felt empty and achy and my nipples throbbed.
I followed Jess down a tiled hallway, hearing the sound of someone mopping behind me as they cleaned up the mess falling off of me. A doorway appeared on the left side of the hall and Jess opened it, clicking on the light switch.
The bathroom was gorgeous, surprising me. I hadn't thought to find something spacious and opulent and so well fitted for a woman in a man's fraternity. The colors were soft, opal and pink with touches of yellow and pale green, the tiles were ceramic, on the floor as well as surrounding the tub and the huge shower. A long counter ran the length of the room with three marble bowls, the opal colored marble shot through with the same colors as the room.
I was afraid to step inside, but Jess waved me in. "You'll find everything you need in here, Stephanie."
No I wouldn't. I knew what I needed and it was marble and ceramic tiles. I needed a man.
"Would you stay?"
"You want me to stay?" he asked, his brows knitting together.
"Oh," I said, as a thought popped into my head. "You have a girlfriend."
"No," he said slowly, smiling. "No girlfriend. Are you sure your boyfriend won't mind if you entertain a strange man?"
"No boyfriend," I said simply.
Jess's smile turned into a wide grin and he pushed me further into the bathroom, closing the door behind himself. He went to the shower, turning on the four heads and checking the temperature of the water. Then he ushered me in with a courtly bow that made me giggle.
I walked into the spray, sighing in relief as the mix on my body rinsed off. Pushing my head back, I picked out a couple of daisies that had stuck in my hair as a result of the matted semen. Then I let the water run through it, enjoying the heat.
"Here," Jess said, startling me. I hadn't heard him come into the shower, too intent upon rinsing away the gunk. He lifted the heavy mass of my hair and ran his fingers through it, getting what he could out before lifting a bottle from a small inlaid shelf. Pouring peach scented liquid into his hands, he started to wash my hair.
I've had men wash my hair before but for some reason, every sensuous stroke of his fingers, every gentle massage had me moaning with pleasure. I tipped my head back, allowing him every freedom he wanted to take, my hands coming back to rest upon his thighs, sliding up and finding the hard proof of his desire.
His gasp was like manna from the heavens and I stroked his steely shaft with trembling fingers. Even my knees were shaking from the force of the sensations I was feeling. The past two hours had been like an aphrodisiac, turning me into a mass of need. How could I have known that being the center of attention in a room full of twenty lusty men would be such a turn on?
Jess rinsed my hair, carefully getting out every last bit of soap, then he reached for another bottle and poured golden liquid into his hands. Rubbing them together he began to wash the rest of me, starting with my shoulders.
His thumbs dug into my muscles, stiffened from lying in one position for so long. I moaned again, my head falling forward. "God, I'll give you a week to stop that," I almost whimpered.
"I think we'll run out of hot water before then," Jess said, slowly thrusting his cock against my hand. I heard the catch in his voice when I squeezed delicately feeling him throbbing and as anxious as I was for what was coming, and I do mean coming.
"You're beautiful," he whispered in my ear, sending another shiver through my system until I thought I'd short circuit and then melt into a puddle to be swept down the drain. "I can understand why those men couldn't leave you alone tonight. I wanted to join them, but this," he sighed, his warm breath caressing my ear, "is so much better."
I turned under his hands, facing him. His hands went to my breasts, round and firm, sitting high on my chest. My nipples were rosy and taut, begging for his fingers. He didn't disappoint me, twisting the hard tips until I let out a wild cry. "I need you," I whimpered, lifting my leg to wrap around him. "Now!"
Jess laughed, whether at the demand in my voice or my attempts to climb his well muscled form, I didn't know. All I did know was that he lifted me, his palms cupping the curves of my ass and then spun, slamming me gently against the wall.
I gasped at the feel of the cold tiles against my back, but they were soon forgotten when he lined his cock up to my yearning pussy and slowly began to push inside.
My moan mixed with his groan as I stretched to fit his cock, feeling him fill me slowly, lowering me down until I could take no more. "Oh God," I whimpered, my face buried in his throat. "That's so good."
"Yeah," he growled, nipping at my shoulder and then my ear before using his palms to raise and lower me over him. He fucked me with vigor, finally pressing me against the wall, using his body to hold me up, his hips undulating in a wonderful rhythm, rubbing against my clit with each new thrust.
I dug my nails into his shoulders, mindless now that he held me there, pinioned against the wall, helpless to his attack. He tortured me, taking me so close, until I was whimpering and begging and then stopping, making me wait no matter how I begged and bitched.
"You're killing me," I cried, my teeth nipping at his throat. "Fuck me, damn you!"
Jess's laugh was like tickling fingers down my spine, making me shiver. I was so close to coming, so close to a huge orgasm. I kicked my feet, my heels beating into his back even as I tried to force him to move over me.
"You want to come?" he asked, lifting his head to look down at me.
"No, what gave you that idea? Yes. Goddamn it."
I wasn't prepared for what happened next. Even now, I can't believe the punishment, the torturous plunging and banging into me, the abuse he put me through. His cock slammed into me, smashing into my clit with each thrust. I could hear his breathing above the sound of rushing water in my head, hear the filthy words he said to me, that only made me wilder.
It was a torturous climb, my heart beat so hard I thought it would beat through my chest, my lungs felt as if they'd never be filled again, my thighs ached and twitched, my pussy burned so wonderfully. I was going to come, I could feel the coil of tension in my belly growing and twining and twisting.
Then I was there. Sharp talons of ecstasy exploded in me, shooting out in waves of heat that prickled over my skin like a thousand tiny pins. My pussy clenched on his cock, the muscles fluttering and grasping around that wonderful piece of flesh. My eyes rolled into the back of my head and I know I screamed, though it was muffled by his shoulder.
He gave three more abusing thrusts and then roared his own satisfaction, pouring his hot seed into my sex, sending me soaring into one more climax until I was nothing more than limp in his arms.
Jess held me, even when my legs fell from his waist, he did nothing more than hold me against him, his hands smoothing over my arms and sides as we both tried to recover.
Finally, he lifted his head, his eyes bright, his cheeks flush. "How did you get here?"
It wasn't what I'd expected to be the first question out of his mouth. "Denny, my brother, brought me."
"Finish your shower," he whispered, dipping his head to find my lips in a slow, soft kiss that spoke more of affection than of sex. "I'll go find him."
Disappointment must have been plain in my eyes because he smiled. "I thought you'd want him to know you were riding home with me."
I know my smile must have been radiant. "Yeah," I said slowly. "That would probably be best."
That was five years ago. Jess and I got married, but that's another story.
Damn. Damn. That story was dynamite and TNT and C-4 all rolled into a ball and tossed into a lit bucket of napalm. Damn.
Great story, liked the interaction between brother and sister, and the fact it was not carried further. Knew Jess was going to be a lucky man.
This would be better if the brother wasn't involved. The brother just makes it icky :(
I don't usually like men cumming all over the place, but this was so well done! I had to put on my suspend disbelief hat for a couple of details, but that is the glorious nature of fantasies... you can erase all the bits that get in the way of complete enjoyment. I enjoyed this fantasy to the fullest. I could see her fruit-covered body so clearly it made my mouth water.
I hate my sister, and I would not offer her up to my frat, or anyone else for that matter, like this.
The brother needs to be castrated.
plzzz ohh plz wright more about thes 2 that was a woundrful short story
Interesting take on the sushi model. Well written, nicely paced and hot!
Yea! Dani,
I thought that you paced the tale very well and the people in it were very real, life-like and belivable. Really, really good.
I read the previous reviewer's comment in the recent comments section and decided to have a read. I've heard of having nude, fruit centerpieces at events, but unfortunately haven't had the pleasure of attending one. At any rate, it turned out to be a uniquely hot story. By the way, I think I'll have a thigh.
My, oh, my. Is it just me, or is it hot in here?...
i like these characters.. is there a chance for another story?
Being a new fan, I gotta tell ya - girl that is HOT!!! What a cool story - the plot, the characters, everything. This is what erotic fiction should be.
You and DKM are two of the best authors here. So glad you are posting here again! You cannot imagine my disappointment when I wanted to read "Christmas Blessings" again, and it was the day you pulled your stories. I hope you repost every one of them.
I was also a fan before but missed this one, and damn, it's good! This is the first group sex story I've ever seen that has a massive orgy-like setting and yet still seems believable and more arousing than gross.
I missed the story the first time around, so it was new, and very enjoyable, to me.
Maybe (retrospect is wonderful isn't it?) it might have been an idea to put a comment at the beginning explaining the situation. I don't know if it is common for authors to take down and then resubmit stories (mine are all still up there - for better or for worse) but we all read so many that we might remember that we have seen something before, but not who actually wrote it.
Could it be that anonymous was actually standing up for you not realising that it was the original reposted?
Anyway, I still like your work and please keep 'em (and us) coming.
I liked when it came out and am glad you brought it back. Still a very good story and a pleasure to read.
Richly textured, sensuous, erotic and luxurious, hot as 5 alarm chile! Magnificent work, great ideas, well crafted and executed.
Go Daniellekitten, Go!
Incredibly erotic, Danielle, and beautifully written. Loved it. ~C
I think you are too darn sensitive. You have to let it go sometimes; even poke fun at yourself every now and then. You are, after all, a writer of fiction. Adult-oriented fiction, I might add. <p>
Most people who read you already know you are a very capable writer. I have read a few of yours, although I am not so into group sex, romance, or other crap like that. <p>
You simply need to relax and just keep writing what you love to write about. <p>
(Tangential note on "group sex" --- where many people exchange bodily fluids, fluids that can look, smell, taste bad and start acting viciously in YOUR body when those millions to trillions of squirming little gals and guys settle down to burrow into your gential and mouth linnings --- is, TO ME ANY WAY, the grossest of human acts. <p>
Don't misunderstand me: I like to WATCH porn where women and men fuck like dogs and monkeys, when the mood strikes... but, Bhudda, to ENGAGE in such an unhealthy, risky act, to exchange smelling saliva and genital fluids like pigs rolling in the mud? <p>
Human hormones, like bug hormones, are darn strong and they can mask many things... but, my god, why people keep doing such gross things, from one group to another, and moan like bitches in heat, but unlike dogs they know they are injesting billions of squirming, live, and sometimes mutating and VICIOUS viruses?, and think nothing of it?! Simply gross!)
i was so happy to see that you re-posted this story. it's short and sweet, and it's definitely one of my favorites!!~
honestly, it's so unfair that people leave nasty comments so freely because they can choose to be anonymous. i hope you don't let yourself be disheartened!
<i>Copied word for word...I am use to reading a story and seeing the ending, middle or even the circumstances change but word for word...where is your honor?</i>
This was not copied. I posted it for the first time on May 8, 2007. It was removed from my storyboard in late December and I have reposted it today. I will put up with the trolls sinking the scores due to their pettiness, but I will not be called a plagaurist. I wrote every word of this story. Where was yours when you had to send your comment anonymously?