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He decided to check his email and was shocked to see two emails forwarded from the email for his Clik-Talk app. That was the one everyone in school was using now instead of snap chat. It didn't make him any money, because he hadn't learned how to sell advertising on it. That was one of the things he had hoped to learn working here at Anderson. He knew as fast as it was growing it had the potential to make him a lot of money. He opened the first email and almost fainted. Then he opened the other one and realized his whole life was about to change but it left him with a conundrum. Which email should he respond too? He needed to talk to a businessman and not his dad. He didn't want his dad to know about either email.

Gio went into his mom's office. She smiled up at him. She'd been so worried when Greg had told her what had happened at school that morning. Then so relieved when he'd shown up and she could see for herself he didn't have a scratch on him. She was upset someone had trashed the motorcycle he'd worked so hard to buy for himself. She wanted to call up that bitch of a Vice Principle and make them find the culprit and make them pay for the damages. Now here he stood in front of her his face conflicted. "Gio baby is something wrong? He held his laptop in his hand and shut the door and locked it. Her eyebrows went up as she wondered what was up, and her pussy became a swamp in her thong at what she hoped was rising. Was her son going to take her like a dirty slut right here in the office? Part of her hoped he was and another part of her prayed he wasn't. Not because Cecilia didn't want his huge cock deep inside her, but because she wasn't sure she wouldn't scream in pleasure letting the whole office know what a motherfucking slut she had truly become. "Can we talk a minute mom?"

Now those were words that no lover ever wants to hear. Never had they been followed by something good. She could still remember the last time Gio had said them to her and then he'd showed her pictures of her husband fucking that little college dropout he'd taken as an office assistant. The little cunt that had destroyed her world and ended her marriage. "Sure baby. I know our relationship has changed, but I will always be your mom first. What's wrong?"

He shook his head. "Nothing's wrong, I just need to tell you somethings and ask your opinion on something. Just let me get it all out ok?"

She relaxed a little, so this was a mom moment not a mommy-slut moment. With the day he'd had she was not surprised and kind of relieved that even after the dynamic shift in their relationship he would still come to her for advice as his mother. "Of course honey. You can tell me anything you know that."

Gio nodded and then started to talk about teaching himself to program and playing around building fun little cell phone and tablet apps. He mentioned a couple of games she even had on her own phone that he'd created. Time wasting games. Then he came to the big news. She wasn't sure she'd heard him right. "Wait! Gio are you saying you created Click-Talk? Like the new social media app everyone's using?" She pulled out her phone and opened her Click-Talk app. "This app?"

Gio nodded. "Yeah I created it. Remember that server I asked dad for on my 18th birthday? The old one from his office when they upgraded? It's run from there. I just didn't know how to sell advertising on it so it hasn't made me any money and I was still working out some bugs."

"Well I can help you sell ads on it and Anderson can help you get them looking sharp."

Gio shook his head. "That's not what I came to ask you about. All this was just background for my problem."

"Okay then tell me what the problem is."

He walked around the desk and couldn't help but smell his mom's arousal as he leaned close. "Stand up, I need your chair."

Cecila stood and Gio sat, then reached up and pulled her down onto his lap. She sighed and leaned back feeling his cock growing hard beneath her ass. She squirmed. "Hmm, I see your problem."

His hand came out and stilled her, pulling her tight against his rising problem. "I'll need to deal with that, but later. This is my problem, right now." He directed her to look at his computer screen and she stilled as she saw the text of the email that she was looking at. "Three million dollars?"

He nodded against the side of her neck as his lips began to place little sucking kisses under her jaw. "Yes, but that's not all." He clicked again and another email from a second big, well-known, social media company came up. She tried to read it, but her nipples had hardened as his hands came up to play with her breasts. Then the words she was reading filtered through her lusty haze and she stilled his hands. "Is this real? They offered you six million?"

"Yeah, which means mom, that the app probably has the potential to make billions. But to get there I'd have to learn a lot and by then something better may have come along. I mean I could sell to them, but which company and do I just accept one of these two offers?" Again she was trying to concentrate on what he was saying, but as he'd been talking he'd opened her shirt and shoved her bra above her tits and was rolling her dusty rose nipples between his thumb and forefinger causing more and more moisture to pour into her panties that were beyond soaked. She could actually feel her juices starting to seep through and make a wet spot in her grey skirt. She reached up and put her hands over his, urging him to knead her breasts harder. He did as she showed him squeezing her tit-flesh, rolling and then gently tugging on her nipples sending sparks straight to her clit. "I, oh that feels so good Gio." His mouth now feasting on the place where her neck met her collar bone. While one hand kept kneading her breasts, the other pulled her skirt up so his hand could stroke across her sopping wet pussy over her panties. "I, oh don't stop. I'm not a business type, I'm just an advertising executive. Maybe you should ask your father."

Gio pushed her panty to the side of her pussy and stroked her lips directly, teasing at the hole like he might start finger fucking her any second. She began to buck up into his hand trying to get his fingers in her needy slit, but he just pulled back keeping light teasing strokes going.

"I'm not going to ask Dad, he'll want part of the money. You know how he is since it's housed on his old server, he'll think he deserves half or more of the money."

"Oh Gio, stop teasing me! I need you to shove that finger in my pussy and make me cum! Then don't ask him. Ask Greg he's a really good businessman. He's a really good man, might make a better mentor for you than your father will. Plus, he's ethical. He wouldn't try to take advantage of you."

Gio thought about that, it was a good idea. So to reward his mother, he slid his finger into her wet sucking cunt and started finger fucking her hard and vigorous. "OH Fuck! She hissed."

He smiled and whispered in her ear. "You need to be quiet mommy-slut, or all your coworkers are going to know what a nasty little slut you really are. Locked away here in your office, letting your son finger your horny pussy. Am I going to have to pull those panties off and shove them in your mouth, mommy?"

She groaned at that thought of him taking off her soaked, with her own pussy juice, panties and cramming them in her mouth. "Do it then, get those pants off and fuck me!"

He stood making her stand with him. Pulled his finger out of her cunt and spun her around kissing her hard. His mouth claiming hers. His tongue thrusting into her mouth just like she hoped he'd be thrusting his Big Fat Cock into her pussy soon. Her hands went down to his pants and she opened them pushing them down his legs wrapping her hand as far as she could around his cock. Squeezing and stroking feeling his precum coating his cock and her hand. She moaned into his mouth. He pulled back. And dropped to his knees. He shoved her ass up on her desk placing his laptop back behind him on the chair they'd just vacated. Then he stuck his head up under her skirt and shoved his tongue into her pussy where his hands had just been. She shoved her hand against her mouth and bit down on her palm to keep from screaming. He thrust his tongue in and out of her fast and furiously, as his finger started rubbing and pinching her clit. She cried out and he reached down grabbed her panties, and she heard them tear as he yanked them forward off her legs.

Gio wadded the ruined soaked panties into a ball and shoved them into her mouth, then really went to work on her pussy. Pinching her clit harder and stabbing his tongue in and out of her like he was fucking her with it. She could taste her desire on the ruined, dirty panties in her mouth. The smell of them in her nose, as she screamed out her first orgasm around them.

Gio stood and spun her around. Grabbing her hands and moving them across the desk. "Hold on to the other edge Mommy slut you dirty girl."

She grabbed hold. "Don't you let go no matter what until I tell you."

She moaned and nodded letting him know she heard him. Then he lifted her skirt and she could feel the cool air of the air conditioner across her exposed ass and pussy. The light kiss of air feeling good on her heated sex, like a gentle lover and then... Crack! Gio's hand came down on her ass making her squeal. "That's what happens to dirty sluts who cum on their desks." CRACK! His hand came down on her other cheek. The pain mixed with the delicious feelings that her pussy felt at every smack on he bare ass. CRACK! CRACK! CRACK! CRACK!

"That's for being a nasty mommy, asking her son to shove his fingers in her pussy at work."

Then he really went to town spanking her until her ass was hot and stinging and her pussy was tight and clenching from it all. "That's for wanting you son to fuck you with his big fat cock while all your coworkers are on the other side of the door. You are such a nasty, motherfucking mommy-slut to want to fuck knowing anyone could catch you. Even if they don't, they'll come into your office and smell the hot nasty sex you're about to have with your own son."

Gio had started rubbing his huge plumb sized cockhead up and down her slit making sure to push harder as it raked across her clit. Cecilia was humping back at him, trying to capture that head and sink it into her gushing pussy. "Do you want me to fuck you on your desk mommy? Is that what you want? Do you want your little boy to shove his hard, hot cock into your needy mommy cunt like a nasty slut?"

Before she could answer he shoved his dick inside and began to slam as much of his huge cock into her as he could. Over and Over he pounded her, and she cried out into the thoroughly soaked panties in her mouth. Droll mixed with her own essence on the cloth, and then started to run down her chin and drip onto the desk. Her tit's pressed against the cool wood adding another sensation to the mix, as Gio used her like he'd promised. Just liked she'd wanted from the moment she first got a look at the monster cock. He didn't slow, He didn't consider how loud she might be getting in her moans and shrieks as she came on his cock again and again, he just kept pumping away. She heard him starting to groan and felt his huge dick grow even bigger and knew he was close to his first cum. She flexed her inner cunt muscles and turned her steaming hot box into a tight throbbing cock glove. She used control she'd forgotten she'd had to move and release those muscles a little at a time like a rippling mouth in her cunt and then she felt his first blast of cum into her steamy pussy. He leaned forward still pounding into her and moving her strawberry blond hair aside he bit her shoulder hard enough to make her cry out and sending her over the edge into another hard cum. She came so hard she squirted all over her son's huge cock and pumping thighs. He come continued to squirt, drenching him and dripping onto the carpet. He just grunted and whispered in her ear. "You squirted your girl cum all over me Mommy-slut and all over the carpet. Now there will be no hiding what you've done. Let's see if I can make you do it again, you nasty son-fucking cunt."

He picked up his pace and just kept hammering into her sucking cunt. She just kept cuming again and again, moaning and squealing into the soaked panties in her mouth. She felt him growing again after a while. Her arms were tired from holding on to the desk and she knew he was about to dump his second load into her hungry womb. She was lost in the thought that she might just get her wish for another baby with her potent son dumping monster load after load of his dominant seed into her fertile pussy. The sodden mess of her ruined panties fell out of her mouth onto the desk Just as he shoved his cum slicked finger deep into her ass. "FUCK ME BABY! FFUCK ME, YOU'RE CUMING DEEP IN MOMMY'S PUSSY! GIVE ME THE BABY YOU PROMISED ME GIOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! GIVE ME MY BABY! KNOCK YOUR MOMMY UP YOU BIG DICK BASTARD!"

Gio's cum spurted and spurted and spurted some more as she sprayed one last cum across her office floor. The sound of her office door clicking closed caused her to look up into the face of her friend and boss Greg Anderson. "Well, this answers a lot of questions about last night, doesn't it?"

Cecilia's eyes went wide. She'd gotten so carried away she forgotten she was at work. Now her boss had caught her screaming like a common slut, as she cummed on her son's big cock begging him to make her pregnant. "Greg, I can explain."

"I'm sure you can." Her boss said with a smile. I'm sure I'll enjoy the explanation too. However, can you explain why you're fucking your son, in your office, while at work? Is it that you wanted the whole office to know you crave your son's big dick? Because if you'd screamed about then minutes earlier most of them would know. Thankfully I was just coming to tell you it was time to leave."

Gio, pulled his moms skirt over her still rosy red ass. "What say we continue this discussion at our house. Besides the fun explanation I would like to talk to you about something Mister Anderson well a couple of somethings and get your opinion on a couple of issues I learned about today."

Greg smiled. "May as well call me Greg, Gio since I've seen you're big fat cock and watched you fuck your mom."

"Works for me. Come on mommy slut time to get you home."

Cecilia was so exhausted from the furious fucking her son just gave her that Greg and Gio each had to take an arm to keep her upright and walking to the parking lot where her car was. They placed her in the passenger seat and Gio drove her home. "Oh God that was so mortifying. I don't know if I can face him tonight or ever."

"Mom you don't have to be embarrassed I think he already knew we were fucking. When you sent him home without fucking his brains out last night."

"Oh God you are not making this better Gio."

Gio laughed. "It's going to be fine mom. I'll handle the conversation tonight. You go take a warm bath and I'll have one of the girls bring you dinner in bed. Don't forget Fiona's room is now yours. But you can use the tub in mine tonight."

Cecilia nodded and slipped into an exhausted blissful nap as her man drove her home completely satisfied.

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thatusernameistakenthatusernameistakenabout 1 month ago

PLEASE get an editor. The terrible grammar and incorrect word choices (genus instead of genius was hilariously bad) keep taking me out of what's otherwise an interesting story.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

This story is so much fun and such a good time. I love the characters are all working off their base instincts of fuck and fight.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

The twins wanting to fuck their father, could have done without that. But as for the rest, juicy content. Curious as to what they're holding over Abi. I wonder if that whole cheerleader-jocks unofficial policy shit actually happens anywhere. The sad thing is that I can actually believe shit like that happens, which is kind of depressing when you think about it.

HardmattersHardmatters9 months ago

Your amazing… I am totally enthralled. And I must say my panties have a gooey sheen on them again. Hope we can be friends. I’d love to know if you have other stories I can read. Love 💕

striker24striker2411 months ago

Having the twins fuck their father...wtf??? Why would they want to fuck their own father and why would Gio want to be a cuckhold? You can be into being cucked but it's not for me.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This story has been so much fun to read and considering your incredibly warped sense of humour I am not surprised because at least we have that in common. Great job with this five star story that I believe will be a classic.

sweetnapoleonsweetnapoleonabout 1 year ago

PREACHERPORN

Love this story especially the over the Topness of it. I still cannot get over all the anonymous criticism, when what your criticizing is someone's imagination.

How is this any different than a book like "Lord of the Rings", "Harry Potter" or a movie like "Star Wars". And no I have never read any of those books, I just think that the comparison makes sense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sorry you had to explain about the big cock. A lot of the critics are complete idiots. They ought to try looking things up. Great fantasy. Keep going and don't let the illegitimate assholes get you down.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yup. Confirmed. Not even a montage of the moves used in the so-called fight. If you want to write about a character with 2 black belts in "martial arts", do your goddamn research. Take a goddamn "class".

Black belter? Cape fwapper, more like it.

upyoursixupyoursixover 1 year ago

Good story but Holy terrible editing

blackknight314blackknight314over 1 year ago

Good job; thanks for sharing your work! I can't stop laughing.

KallamezKallamezover 1 year ago

Goddamn, Daddy Anderson was so fucking badass!

rem556rem556almost 2 years ago
Contradiction

In an earlier chapter you had stated that Gio's endowment was about 7 1/2 " around.

At the beginning of this chapter it was stated that it is 3 1/2 " across. That equals nearly 11" around. 7.5 around is actually 2.38" across(pretty hefty)!

Formula (C= pi times D) or (D= C/pi).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I almost quit reading the story due to a lot of asshole behavior of the main character last chapter. I know this is over the top sex comedy, but the violence, verbal or emotional, makes my skin crawl. Thanks for lightening up. You really have developed these characters. Good job

Radomir1Radomir1over 2 years ago

Perfect.

Greg Anderson met his daughters at home in the evening. They tried to seduce him and admitted that Gio had let them. Greg took them back to the girls' room and called Gio asking him to come over right away. When he arrived Greg explained to Gio that he had given the girls to him. Completely. They belonged only to him. As a responsible man, he could not share them. The girls are either his completely or he can go suck his own dick. That's the last tako talk. Also, don't bite more than you can swallow. Your women are your responsibility, don't take more than you can satisfy, provide and protect. Relationships are a two-way street. But there's only one traffic controller. Then there will be no chaos. There can only be one head in the family. In a harem, one sultan. In the Pride, one Alpha.

Radomir1Radomir1over 2 years ago

Perfect.

Greg Anderson met his daughters at home in the evening. They tried to seduce him and admitted that Gio had let them. Greg took them back to the girls' room and called Gio asking him to come over right away. When he arrived Greg explained to Gio that he had given the girls to him. Completely. They belonged only to him. As a responsible man, he could not share them. The girls are either his completely or he can go suck his own dick. That's the last tako talk. Also, don't bite more than you can swallow. Your women are your responsibility, don't take more than you can satisfy, provide and protect. Relationships are a two-way street.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

How to lose potential readers: add too many fetishes or fetishes that tend to contradict.

Example: Write about a supposed dominant alpha, but have the character share his lovers. Sharing lovers is what non-dominant males do to curry favor from other males.

Bonus: Each additional fetish reduces your potential audience, it does not increase it. Thus, having bro/sis, mother/son, and father/daughter does not give you a larger potential audience, but a smaller one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A lot of people are constantly talking shit about these stories but almost all of this person's stories have the hot tag

The_Sheppards_CorrectionThe_Sheppards_Correctionalmost 3 years ago

Let me first say, this series is brilliant! I’m not an expert nor an author on LIT. I’ve experienced a good many years on this planet and I’m an avid reader. I also grew up as a skinny, bullied nerd. I love every aspect of the chapters in this series. They’re moving into my Favorite stories folder. Thank you for sharing your creative genius with us!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Quit crying, these suck anyway.

If you can't take the criticism, don't publish your crap. If you are, don't be a whiny ass bitch and cry about it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
wow

love it. do suggest you read it again though as she took her panties off and put in her mouth and next sentence he ripped them off and put them in her mouth. Still fantastic story she must have worn 2 pair???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
He is suppose to have a humongous penis,

yet he can shove it into a virgin butt with no preparation? This kid must really suffer from "penis envy" where he must be significantly blow average; maybe he is larger than we think ( 4 - 41/2 inches)?

Every time I read where one of these kids has a character with such a large penis, I think the typist must suffer from "penis envy" and figure the kid must use a multiplier of 3 to 4 of his own size. So much for fooling the reader.

knpvknpvover 3 years ago

great fuck the detractors in their necks fantasy is good

Rocky_NorthRocky_Northalmost 4 years ago
Great story, needs proofreading

Love your content, Preacher, but your grammar could use a bit of tweaking. With a little proofreading this would be perfect. Want a volunteer?

flynndriderflynndrideralmost 4 years ago

He is a genus. Truely the smarticlest of us all

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

whens the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More please

These stories are hot. Ignore the haters and keep it going please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
GREAT STORY

please contine the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More

Any word on when the next part will be released

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Earlier anonymous

Never mind just checked out your bio that's why you're adding the dad😂😂 lol just kidding lol you keep doin you brotha💯 probably not gon read anymore of it cuz that's not my cup of tea but like I said everything else I read was great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Great story !! one of the best I've ever read! love everything about it except for one thing...why authors are always deciding to bring in other guys, it takes away from it a little bit like what other guy (unless he swings that way not judging) wants to be with a girl after she was fucking and sucking another dude ? It's weird to me lol but at the end of the day it's your story and I'm not judging keep doing you and like I said everything else was great

Timtom12Timtom12almost 4 years ago
Awesome

Keep it coming!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Great story hope you keep writing, and don’t let the naysayers get to you they don’t have to keep reading.

aakr5144aakr5144almost 4 years ago
A delight

it is a delight to read your stories. hope the next part comes soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Gr8

Keep up the great story line. MStillany variables from here: Still bang some of the faculty in orgy. 2 Seek more revenge on coach and jocks on a tape some how FXdTSr

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Next Chapter Please

Keep Writing. Enjoyed Reading The Series. Please Continue...

BigBilly8inBigBilly8inalmost 4 years ago
Very good and I hope there is more coming

I have throughly enjoy reading these stories. I do hope that you continue this...

I can't wait for the rest...

ineedanameineedanamealmost 4 years ago
Idiotic

Reality is one thing, but this is just completely idiotic. Reads like it was written by a 13 year old.

DugtherugDugtherugalmost 4 years ago
One of the best

This is absolutely one of the best stories I've read on literotica. Keep up the good work, and please don't let the haters get you down. I love the fantasy aspect and the growing relationship between Gio and Greg. The father Gio never had. Again, thanks for the fantastic story. I can't wait for to see what happens next!!!!

HragsHragsalmost 4 years ago
Love chapter 4.... Now is chapter 5,6,7,8,9 coming. Please!!!!

We got to have more !!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Everyone

Gio needs to take the twins his mom and the dad in an all out dominating orgy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
You are doing a great job

When he did the assistant principal that was really hot. I hope put Gio in a situation where he finds other women who "think" they have control and then after see Gio's huge cock they become little sluts begging for it. I would like to see these women offer a little more resistance until they feel his cock inside of them.e7ranw

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
What a great read

I'm enjoying this chapters alot. Please continue to write them

RodimusMikeRodimusMikealmost 4 years ago
So Utterly Priceless.

At the first of the story when Gio is fighting the Jocks it mentioned Gio had a fighting style like one of those Used Car Windsock Puppets,and I damn near lost my supper I laughed my fucking ass off so hard.I mean seriously those things are both obnoxious and dangerous,one time I was driving along and one dealership had one too close to the road and the thing came down right in front of me and got hung on the front of my car and I literally ripped that sucker in half with my car and tore that bitch to shreads before I slammed on brakes before I crashed,it went up over my windshield.

People ran out of the dealership and saw the mangled Windsock Puppet in rags and they tried to pay me $300 as compensation but being the honorable guy I am I asked if I could keep the windsock puppet and the fan (since both were basically ruined) I took them home,found some similar material,and a new plug for the fan and fixed them almost good as new,and sold it to a buddy of mine for $100 since he collected stuff like that,and he still has it to this day on his property annoying the neighbors with it day and night.

So I say those things are just a menace but they are effective to piss many people off if you cross paths with one.Okay this story is just a riot,keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Back to the Future

Loving the story. Has anyone else noticed the P.E teacher is Biff Tanner?? lol :p

Brandon11Brandon11almost 4 years ago
Gio

What a fun read. Keep it going. And your vengeance series also. Fun stories love them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great atuff

I really look forward to more chapters of Gio and his girls . As others have said this is a fantasy world. You are it's creator.... Let the story take you when it will.... This chapter was fantastic, especially the after fight scenes.

MrDonNottyMrDonNottyalmost 4 years ago
Love it

This just gets better and better with every chapter the potential to explode into so much is amazing keep it up

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984almost 4 years ago

Keep them coming, yes it's out there but I think that's part of the enjoyment of it as it's a break from reality.

nightshadebjsnightshadebjsalmost 4 years ago
Part 4

Love where this is going.

Looking forward to reading more

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81almost 4 years ago
keep em cumming lol

great stuff man its just out there enough that its captivating and keeps us wanting more. cant wait for whats next

linnearlinnearalmost 4 years ago
Gets Better With Every Chapter

You are doing at fine job, it's EROTIC FICTION, who cares about negative comments? I just hope he stays hydrated😁.

baldsanta9730baldsanta9730almost 4 years ago
Keep them coming

I just read the last 3 chapters. they were great. Totally enjoyed them. Keep them coming,

plenty of room to grow

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
SO FREAKING GREAT!

Yeah, it's over-the-top; yeah, it's unbelievable; yeah, it's 'impossible'. That's what makes it so GREAT! This is a fantasy world, what's with those idiots that cry, 'unrealistic'. THIS IS FANTASY, GET A FUCKING CLUE, WOULD YA!!! Oh, and PreacherPorn? Keep up the excellent fantasy story thing you got going, here. I am SO excited to see what happens next! Throbbing with anticipation, here!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Well done.

While it definitely pushes the boundaries of reality, you sell it! Everything that you describe (and you describe it excellently, I must add) can be explained within the story. There are still some errors which you should fix, but the story holds together.

Rdk781Rdk781almost 4 years ago
Ignore the spell checkers

Keep calm and ignore the people without imagination...yes it's fantasy you the author have stated repeatedly I have liked it from the start keep it going as long as you can I'm loving the story line

MerumeMerumealmost 4 years ago
No sharing

I hate when women are shared in these stories. I hope you don't let the twins father fuck them or anyone else.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Ignore the nay-sayers!

Keep writing your fiction! It IS entertaining. Not sure why people would keep reading these if they thought they were so unrealistic! lol.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great story

Love the story. Keep it going!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please continue

Al I can say is to steal a line from a very famous song," with a tebel yell, I cried more,, more more!

kaidmankaidmanalmost 4 years ago
another earth shattering chapter

very good chapter I am completely drawn into this story and the characters I really want to see how this goes

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Saw the posting at the end of chapter 3. Saying that chapter 4 was to come out today. So looked up your bio page and there it was. Just amazing on how this story is progressing. Now I'm looking forward to chapter 5 so please keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great Series!

I love the story. Please keep it going! Just ignore the assholes that want to complain about “realism”.

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