- Group Sex
- Centerpiece
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All Comments on 'Centerpiece'
by Daniellekitten
- 28 Comments
great well written novel story. hope it is true. I know several women who would love to take your place.
<i>Copied word for word...I am use to reading a story and seeing the ending, middle or even the circumstances change but word for word...where is your honor?</i>
This was not copied. I posted it for the first time on May 8, 2007. It was removed from my storyboard in late December and I have reposted it today. I will put up with the trolls sinking the scores due to their pettiness, but I will not be called a plagaurist. I wrote every word of this story. Where was yours when you had to send your comment anonymously?
i was so happy to see that you re-posted this story. it's short and sweet, and it's definitely one of my favorites!!~
honestly, it's so unfair that people leave nasty comments so freely because they can choose to be anonymous. i hope you don't let yourself be disheartened!
I think you are too darn sensitive. You have to let it go sometimes; even poke fun at yourself every now and then. You are, after all, a writer of fiction. Adult-oriented fiction, I might add. <p>
Most people who read you already know you are a very capable writer. I have read a few of yours, although I am not so into group sex, romance, or other crap like that. <p>
You simply need to relax and just keep writing what you love to write about. <p>
(Tangential note on "group sex" --- where many people exchange bodily fluids, fluids that can look, smell, taste bad and start acting viciously in YOUR body when those millions to trillions of squirming little gals and guys settle down to burrow into your gential and mouth linnings --- is, TO ME ANY WAY, the grossest of human acts. <p>
Don't misunderstand me: I like to WATCH porn where women and men fuck like dogs and monkeys, when the mood strikes... but, Bhudda, to ENGAGE in such an unhealthy, risky act, to exchange smelling saliva and genital fluids like pigs rolling in the mud? <p>
Human hormones, like bug hormones, are darn strong and they can mask many things... but, my god, why people keep doing such gross things, from one group to another, and moan like bitches in heat, but unlike dogs they know they are injesting billions of squirming, live, and sometimes mutating and VICIOUS viruses?, and think nothing of it?! Simply gross!)
Incredibly erotic, Danielle, and beautifully written. Loved it. ~C
Richly textured, sensuous, erotic and luxurious, hot as 5 alarm chile! Magnificent work, great ideas, well crafted and executed.
Go Daniellekitten, Go!
I liked when it came out and am glad you brought it back. Still a very good story and a pleasure to read.
I missed the story the first time around, so it was new, and very enjoyable, to me.
Maybe (retrospect is wonderful isn't it?) it might have been an idea to put a comment at the beginning explaining the situation. I don't know if it is common for authors to take down and then resubmit stories (mine are all still up there - for better or for worse) but we all read so many that we might remember that we have seen something before, but not who actually wrote it.
Could it be that anonymous was actually standing up for you not realising that it was the original reposted?
Anyway, I still like your work and please keep 'em (and us) coming.
I was also a fan before but missed this one, and damn, it's good! This is the first group sex story I've ever seen that has a massive orgy-like setting and yet still seems believable and more arousing than gross.
You and DKM are two of the best authors here. So glad you are posting here again! You cannot imagine my disappointment when I wanted to read "Christmas Blessings" again, and it was the day you pulled your stories. I hope you repost every one of them.
Being a new fan, I gotta tell ya - girl that is HOT!!! What a cool story - the plot, the characters, everything. This is what erotic fiction should be.
i like these characters.. is there a chance for another story?
My, oh, my. Is it just me, or is it hot in here?...
I read the previous reviewer's comment in the recent comments section and decided to have a read. I've heard of having nude, fruit centerpieces at events, but unfortunately haven't had the pleasure of attending one. At any rate, it turned out to be a uniquely hot story. By the way, I think I'll have a thigh.
Yea! Dani,
I thought that you paced the tale very well and the people in it were very real, life-like and belivable. Really, really good.
Interesting take on the sushi model. Well written, nicely paced and hot!
plzzz ohh plz wright more about thes 2 that was a woundrful short story
I hate my sister, and I would not offer her up to my frat, or anyone else for that matter, like this.
The brother needs to be castrated.
I don't usually like men cumming all over the place, but this was so well done! I had to put on my suspend disbelief hat for a couple of details, but that is the glorious nature of fantasies... you can erase all the bits that get in the way of complete enjoyment. I enjoyed this fantasy to the fullest. I could see her fruit-covered body so clearly it made my mouth water.
This would be better if the brother wasn't involved. The brother just makes it icky :(
Great story, liked the interaction between brother and sister, and the fact it was not carried further. Knew Jess was going to be a lucky man.
Damn. Damn. That story was dynamite and TNT and C-4 all rolled into a ball and tossed into a lit bucket of napalm. Damn.