All Comments on 'Charley'

Always a one.

Sorry, but you really lost me in the first couple of paragraphs. "Hey you are 18? Im gonna fuck you!" ... "What are you doing?" ... "Im gonna fuck you, now hold my beer!" - and it kept going that way. Now, don't get me wrong. Erotic literature does not have to be realistic. Guys with massive dicks, girl all time ready, but this is just taking it over the top. There could not be any less storywise.

HI,

I have been a member for a lot of years and whenever I see you have a new story I always read. Your imagination is wild and I love it. Keep up the great work.

Jim A

I had to stop reading this rape story. If I was Angela's father, I would blow your fucking head off at the stump.