All Comments on 'Chelsea's 18th Birthday Ch. 03'
by Submissioness
- 13 Comments
You added another great chapter to the series. I like how you written Clay into the plot this time and that he had got caught by Angela when he was masturbating in her apartment with her lingerie all around him. I can hardly wait to see what you do too them in the next chapter. I also like how you have developed the characters of Brent and Chelsea in this chapter. I like seeing the softer side of both of them and how they're coming together as a couple.
This is a GREAT story of HOT-HOT (but tender) SEX! A deserving boy gets decelibated by a devoted, more experienced woman, and Chelsea's new experiences continue. But I'm bothered a bit by the total focus on animal coupling. We need to keep gentleness and personal, emotional (yeah, spiritual) values solidly in the mix. Still, I did say five stars, didn't I? Ah, good loving!
I LOVED IT! YOU SHOULD CONTINUE TO WRITE STORIES LIKE THIS ONE! AMAZING!
This series is just getting better by the chapter. I had a 'hard' time finishing it. I love how Chelsea is growing from a shy virginal girl to a willing and eager lover. She and Brent seem made for each other. Absolutely wonderful! So many questions for the next chapter. Here's to hoping Chelsea wants more anal play!
Being caught jacking off by a sexy woman only to find that it turned her on to the point of seducing him is every guys fantasy. I wish it would happen to me.
This could easily have been expanded into two chapters. I'm going to read it again and again!
ideas for ch4. go on about how chelse and cody's relationship and ang and clay's relationships grow with many for sex/intimate moments :) i would love love love to read more about them you should just write a book!
I really like Chelsea & Brent stories... It will be wonderful to see their complicity and confidence to enhance.
Perhaps, It would be nice to see a bit of jealously situations, like a friend at Chelsea's' work or whatever, and the possibility of empowering Chelsea a little bit, rocking that conceited Brent's behavior.
Please, do continue writing, I'm looking forward to read next chapter.
please continue the series! Best series on the site, I absolutely love them! Write more please!!!
Please continue with chelsa's story with Brent and chelsa this was great!!