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Click hereFor a guy that came to town for the summer, just drifting, I have to say that I was very lucky to find my dream. Especially because I didn't know that it was my dream at the time.
Quote: Life goes on.
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why anyone would pursue that stupid bitch is beyond me. let her be with the rich prick.
This is a great yarn, with a side helping of humour to spice the story. Well worth five stars.
Really great story! Thoroughly enjoyed it. You really do write some excellent stories and those who don't like the content or the endings, know what to do! Go to another author or genre!! 5*s.
I have said before these A$$ holes that take apart others stories have not written any thing. they hide their names . if the want a perfect 1 go to a book store & lay out 25 or 40 $ on 1.
The vernacular and musings match a 60 year old, not a 24 year old. Sorry, but 24 year olds don’t smoke cigars with a whiskey in hand by themselves on a daily basis. Otherwise a good story.
had a 66 an 1/2 when they first put the v 8 289 rag top sold it & bought a truck. kick myself many time over.
there is all ways some A$$ HOLE name less who nit picks . man up and identify your self.
Usually don't comment on my work much but have to answer a couple of comments. I know that there was no 67 Mustang Mach One. First was in 69. I know this because I like Mustangs and I drove one for a while in 71. The 67 was a typo and I didn't catch it until it was mentioned in some comments. So cut me a break. I hope the typo didn't keep you from enjoying the story.
Woodmanone
Very good story. Enjoyed tremendously. No sex needed in this story . If I want sex I watch porn.
I really enjoyed this one. You have real talent as a writer. Not many do.
Much of this was awkward. How he decided that he wanted to marry Alexis is unclear, because it comes out of the blue. Whatever happened was said, not shown. And it's the showing that counts. How many times is he going to say sorry? That seemed almost like a theme, and unless it involves bumping into someone with a mumbled sorry, it's entirely just unpleasant. Almost as unpleasant as getting thrown into a blackberry thicket. So, there was conflict, and a plot, and it was resolved. It was even pretty good until some time after she goes off in her huff about being her conscience. The dialogue after the job interview wasn't good. Partly because the story goes at a bone jarring pace, without any leadup, leaving people to talk as if they have known each other for years and just bare it all, but they haven't; it's shamelessly forward. Plus I must have missed the romantic development between her telling Henry off at the dance and talking to the father about marriage. I believe it takes more than discovering the guy you were going out with is an asshole. And, it's incredible that she didn't see it; she must have been smitten not to see it, which probably foreshadows a future of being seduced. This recipe has been done much better, more subtle, and necessarily longer.
Good story, I enjoyed it a lot. I thought the old man’s comparison of a young woman to a young colt, both knowing what they need, but afraid of it until they get used to the idea, was a pretty good analogy. One thing for those who don’t know (and yes, I know this is a fictional tale), the Mustang Mach I was introduced by Ford in August of 1968 as a 1969 model. Same year as the Boss 302. Which for my money is the better car. Nitpicking, I know, but I do love me some Mustangs. 5 stars, no doubt.
I have read a number of your stories I enjoy them very much continue writing
A cast of misfits. Best part was watching the two kids figure out they were in love.