All Comments on 'Contest'

stupid, not ralistic, disgusting - 1*

Wrestling would.have been more interesting.

Women always outlast men. Just add a little KY and she's good to go. This is simply the reverse of a husband pimping out his wife to another man. What wife is this stupid? When one of the women turns out to be a much better fuck, better at BJ's, loves anal or has a ton of money, their marriage is over. Who would risk that for a few minutes of cheap sex? Has he never masturbated? Was he really willing to embarrass his wife and make her feel like she wasn't enough for her husband? Really ugly story.

1 star

I thought only wives could do that. The story was very well written and no egregious mistakes but with no drama it just sat there.

I'm sure you'll do better next time.

R.

while he's regularly fucking other men's wives? These people have no concept of honor, or self respect. Guess you can't put into your characters traits you are unfamiliar with.

No tension or believability for us to get interested in your characters or plot. Thanks for your effort anyway.

A well written and loving yarn that fits the Valentine theme well. Will, William, Bill became Mike at one point... I refuse to comment more on this minor slip, but can't help but wonder if there might be a "Freudian" moment happening there. (Ha ha)

Having been involved in a 'similar' situation, I really marvel at Bill's stamina. Other than that, I loved the story that was obviously written from the female point of view.

the perfect elixirs to fix a weak marriage. You might as well write a story about how meth amphetamines improve the social fabric of the community.

In this story and in his other submissions to Literotica, the author oddly appears obsessed with the idea of one man having the prowess to satisfy the sexual needs of numerous women. From a psychological perspective, such an obsession is most likely an ego defense mechanism refered to as reaction formation. The underlying psychobiologic condition is most likely impotence.