All Comments on 'D.I.L.L.I.G.A.F. Ch. 09'
by HOG57head
- 21 Comments
This chapter was more impactful than a lot of the earlier ones. It moved the story forwards, showed him trying to set things up to help others in shitty circumstances, and finally moved things forwards with Beth & Mandy. It would've been nice to hear whatever justifications his wife had for her behavior and still not wanting a divorce.
Excellent chapter. You brought a lot of pieces together, but I feel with 3 chapters left ,,it ain't over yet. Looking forward to the next chapters. 5stars
Story was great (loved it), but I do agree with insofar of the wife not desiring a divorce, it made no sense. Ron mentions there was a significant disconnection over many months, the wife continually ignoring him and yet she is oblivious to her husbands' situation. WTF?
If possible, it would be nice to see a wrap up as the fall out was not in pace with the build up of so many (potential) divorces, the wailing of Vicky (judging by her dismay) and to some degree, Vicky's reasoning maybe.
Anyway, regardless, enjoyed the story, well done!
Liked it a bunch, I hope the last chapters follow suit. Some women are so caught up in themselves, they can't see the Forest through the Trees. 5 stars
Well the story started moving!
Yeah!
Given how much time the author gives to menutiae, I would expect at least one of the remaining chapters will be devoted to WTF the wife was thinking.
OK... rounding the final turn, heading for the finish line...
It's been a fairly long journey, and as the song says, "...what a long strange trip it's been !"
Looking forward to the final parts of the saga, and finding out I'd tge live that's been obvious from the beginning from Beth & Mandy comes out, is expressed, accepted, and returned.
My guess is they become a 'throuple', they win the bid for the huge new project, and it winds up in a 'happily ever after' !
Not a sappy, saccharine-sweet end, but a realistic and believable ending.
Making the story longer just means that you include more clichés.
For example: "walking on eggshells avoiding the elephant in the room."
'l was too busy spreading my legs to get you a gift' Don't worry baby, l got you something special.....
l didn't understand the pile of panties on the floor. Seems like it would ruin the surprise of being served.
Just found the story and am enjoying it. Maybe I missed it but what does the story title mean?
The Chinese water torture has nothing on the HOG, nine chapters of meandering nonsense to get to serving papers on the bitch, admittedly it’s well written nonsense but nonsense just the same and frankly once he found out he was just as much of a slut as she was.
Still it leaves no doubt if there were any this a fantasy site.
Not something I really thought of before but the whole dynamic changes when a woman goes from a wife cheating with everyone to a divorced and single woman sleeping with everyone doesn't it?
Sleeping with a married woman is seen as a victory. Even if she's a complete slut that sense of victory is still there. Once she's divorced then it opens the doors for all the disgusting to flood in. The fact she slept with everyone turns most men off where as they'd all high five each other and act like they're a part of a club had she been married.
Then of course there's the fact she might want a relationship. The only guys that would want to have a relationship with a woman that slept with practically every other man they know are the men that search for stories with the cuckold tag, sort by highest rating, and spend the evening edging and eating their own cum. Not to say that those men are good or bad in any way when it comes to relationships. Only that there isn't a whole lot of them. Her options of partners would be insanely tiny. It would be like trying to find a life partner when you have an incurable and highly transmissible STD that's so rare that it might as well be named after you.
This is the best chapter so far. They all were 5 stars rating, this one is 5++++. Why? Because it has started to bring the loose ends together. Started to get into the minds of the key players in your comedy/drama/sexcapade and a possible inter/intra relationship with each other. Keep going, you're doing damn good.
owith just the right amount of BTB included with the serious beginning of helping others in similar circumstances. Looking forward to reading the next chapters as this story continues to unfold Please excuse the typos as my computer has a hard time keeping up with my thoughts. Gave it 5 STARS
I also would like to know what's up with Vicky. I expected her to say "it took you this long to notice? Bye." Was she part of a stealth cuckold club, and they won't let her have military grade gangbangs if she's not married to an oblivious ostrich of a husband?
I liked the story part of this story, it's great seeing a protag do something to improve things rather than sit on a bench while wife-2.0s rain upon him.
I didn't like Vicky, because I still don't know who or what she is. The puzzle pieces seem impossible to fit. If I were to really stretch the logic, it's like this. Vicky is being blackmailed and threatened into corporate whoring. She emotionally disconnects from her husband to salve her guilt (and to keep him from getting STDS), then finds she somewhat likes being (raped) which makes her feel more guilty and excited. She is completely in denial that her husband can notice anything because she feels morally absolved by her actions to protect his person and her position, and she expects to put this completely behind her soon. Now that the illusion is shattered, she fights them openly, hoping to save her marriage. Too little too late. Just a wild guess.
Not really a great chapter but, in the overall course of the story, a needed one. I trust future chapters will have Ron visiting with the various soon-to-be ex-wives for more fun and games while developing a healthy sex group relationship with Beth and Mandy.
Overall, it's been a good series and I look forward to it continuing for quite a while.
CONGRATULATIONS for this EXCELLENT story!!!!!
Looking forward to reading more if possible ;)
I too thought there would be more to Vicky's side of the story. Was she drugged, did she cheat for a promotion, did she think she was getting away with it, did it get her off, etc?? She was obviously surprised. What happened with all the guys and her company that were served? Just alot more interesting things than project management.
Not enough spreadsheet discussion. The job interview with the scheduler hire seems rushed as well. Probably need two pages for that.
Why the big breakfast for just the two of them?