by CleverUserName1
Wow that was so hot of a story, I hope you continue writing such great stories further...😅
Very imaginative and intriguing fantasy. Well written and with great transitional style from chapter to chapter. Great job!
Very well done! What a hot story. Love it and all of your other works
The ONLY negative thing I could say, proof read, or have someone else proof read before publishing. But what a creative and great writer you are!