All Comments on 'Detective in High Heels'

Special thanks to ExSoCalLaw for his advisory opinions.

As always, thanks to all the readers for reading this.

Heyall

Enjoyed the story. Hopefully we'll read more of the exploits (exploited?) of Detective Kelly soon.

Love the story. Would love to read about her taking down a brothel or getting gang banged.

One word. Series?

brokenlance13

Thanks for the opportunity to look at some of these stories before they are complete. Its my honor to lend ideas and critiques to an author as prolific as you are.

more like a 1950's stag magazine--but well done!

Not sure how giving a blowjob then having sex with camera recording makes her trustworthy. Cops get no blame for anything they have to do whilst undercover, and a rival gang would have used a woman experienced in sex anyway.

Really enjoyed it! I’m hopeful we hear more of her exploits :)

I know you don’t like sequels much, but it would be so good to see this foxy detective solve a few cases and fuck her way to the top. :)

I Fucked the law and the law Cums. Hottest cop story ever! Don't leave us hanging, add another chapter or two. Thanks for this one!

Loved it, 5*

This is so fucking hot! I think this one deserves a part 2.

I liked her strength. This feels like the beginning of a series of stories about our superhero.

(And thanks as well for not giving her big breasts. Someone normally athletic was a pleasant twist.)

Love the story! For the undercover suspense and sexual tension. She did what she had to do. Reminds me of the Detective Kimberly Grante story that you wrote. I hope you put that one back up as well.

I want to be an undercover detective ❤️❤️❤️❤️