by homealone_447
this story should have been put under incest not this one. everything else was pretty good. i just do not like family get togethers..
I have seen the cgi you mentioned . It's pretty good . I enjoyed reading this again this time with out the comic like feel . As far as any anon complaints about it being in the wrong place ; simply ignore those . Your story fits into multiple places and this is one of them .
I was very interested and thought this was pretty hot. That is until the mom got involved. I don't mind incest but any kind yuri kills it for me. And there was so much I couldn't really just skip over it. So all in all, it was ok. Likely would have been a lot better for me if there was no lesbian stuff.
Great ideas, but rushed. More time on the experiences. How it felt, the enormity of the situations, to expand on the actuality of what happened.