All Comments on 'Escape from Earth Ch. 07'
by bobrobertson
- 9 Comments
Didn't enjoy this chapter. Still like your story as a whole though, and will I continue to read it. Maybe cut down on the rape content.
I read this whole series in one go. I like it. I can't stand the general though! Poor Xanxaa. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. It will be interesting to see how Adam survived.
my enthusiasm in this series is diminishing.
I've liked it, but less and less each installment. Too little advancement in the actual story each chapter.
It's ok but perhaps longer chapters would make it much more readable. It always stops just as I'm getting into it.
To those who have read, voted, and commented (here and to my email), I appreciate all the feedback. I personally prefer shorter chapters, so to those who prefer longer chapters I can only say sorry. I have submitted the next chapter, which is the last chapter before the Epilogue finale. There is some more rapey stuff in the next chapter, so consider yourself warned. Thanks again!
Looking forward to seeing the next chapter. Thank you for taking the time and effort to write such a wonderful story.
I thought it was odd that she's having multiple orgasms now when she never had orgasms before, maybe I missed the part where that was explained. Don't feel like going back and looking for it.
This chapter is way too long on torture / rape. should have reduced that part from 2 pages to 2 paragraphs and focused on something else for the rest of the chapter. All other chapters have been a 5. this one is a 1. Hope the remaining chapters turn around. Otherwise a great series!