by ilikeithot6308
...and hope to hear more. Very likeable characters. Horny, likeable characters.
Well ... Very well, and done up right !!! And, balanced, too! Your descriptions of the 'model', as seen by the photographer, were a definite bonus. TY
I really hope you write more about these characters. I'd love to see how things progress for them
Great story. Up till now the best put down was "no thanks I already have one asshole in my pants" but your " "how about class, charm, money, talent...and me!" trumps it.
Thanks for a very good read. !!!
A great follow up to the first chapter. Not in regards to the sex, the first chapter has this one beat all to hell on the sex. But, the burgeoning relationship is very nice. Thank you
I like the characters you write.
Many time it's seems like this character is a guy or gal because the writer says so.
The characters feel more real.
They feel feminine or masculine as Im reading.
A not too common thing.
Keep up the good work.
I Can rate my choices higher because I rate You as the first Star, a shining star among authors. Your characters have feelings and integrity. Even the barroom bully who knew when to back down. Definitely will entertain for years to come. OK ... Decades and eons.
Really like these characters, and actually characters in all your stories I've read so far!
AND there's even a 3rd chapter for these 2...!
You seem to have an intimate knowledge of this biz....
This one was the best yet!
I think I've made my opinion of the stories of yours that I've read as clear as I possibly can with the comments I've left, but "... best yet" is all I can think of for this story.
I'm just tongue tied!
And as has already been said, her reply to the "ring leader" was absolutely out-fucking-standing!
Brought back a memory of a young lady I was leaving an establishment with, replying to a similar question with, "He's a Sweetheart. He's not just trying to get into my pants. But that doesn't mean he's not going to."
Keep up the great work!
I really enjoy the technical aspects of the story; it almost makes me want to try my hand at learning photography.
And of course, your characters are so damn likable. And the sex is hot, of course. :p
I'm so sorry. It should have been 5 stars, but my fumbling fingers hit only 2 stars.
Very very sorry :-( :-(
Enjoying how this story has unfolded so far, will now check out the next chapter.