by StoryTeller07
Hi, keep up the good work on this story. Although the daughter seems to have disappeared for more than the 1 night. What happened to her?
loved it...and well written.
little grammar/typo/spelling/misuse of lie vs lay easily skipped over.
curious about daughter wendy. realize the difficulty of working her into the story, which stands on its own. five stars.
i´ll be looking at your others!