All Comments on 'FLR Introduction Club (Pt. 01 of 3)'
by SusanSelton
- 10 Comments
Great story! Thank you.
I love… “Show us what a big boy you are."
Maybe some foot worship? Penis measuring and hacking off in the upcoming chapters? Either way, thank you, sexy story.
Very exciting. CFNM is about female power over a male’s body, as well as over his will. You make the dynamic hot.
Can't wait to see more of Deborah and how She works him over with her nails.
This is a cut above the vast majority of the other stories on this website. You have a lovely way with words and you build tension up very skilfully.
Very well written! I love emphasis on consent and Loving control. 5 here!
Reminds of my 20s , stationed in Charleston S.C. Met a woman in her late20's . Before I knew what was going on, I was automatically getting nude at her place. Whether she had guests or no. My introduction to oral worship and pantie wearing. She brought out of me the lifelong Femdom guy I am. Can't ever thank her enough. So Carla from Summerville, thank you
"discrete"/"discretely"
The word you're looking for is "discreet". "Discrete" means something else.
"The boy's penis was now nearly perpendicular to his body."
"Perpendicular to" means "at 90 degrees to", so if the male is standing, the penis would be pointing at the horizon. That isn't at all an impressive erection for a young man. Perhaps you meant "perpendicular to the ground"?
At least the overall story idea is OK.
Being a fan of a FLR and any degree of female domination, I find this not only titillating but highly erotic, basically because of the quality of the piece. The writing is exemplary.