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Click here"Um," I said, possibilities flashing through my mind. "Maybe you three could line up on the edge of the bed with your asses in the air, and I could fuck each of you over and over until one of you makes me come?"
The three girls all grinned and Lauren slapped my ass before stepping onto the bed on her knees. "Now that sounds very hot."
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- COMMENTS
I'm enjoying the story, but there's one little thing that feels like running over a speed bump at full throttle. Please people, learn the difference between "me" and "I," particularly when there's a second person in the sentence. The easiest thing to try is to leave out the other person, then decide whether me or I applies. For example, you would never say, "give the cake to I," you say "give the cake to me." That doesn't change just because you add another person: "Give the cake to Lauren and me."
Okay, I'm putting my soap box away now.
This Jer guy is almost too stupid to believe. Many derp moments...why doesn't he use some of his magic to give himself a working brain? Then he can talk to the fairy to figure things out, use magic to improve himself and gain money. This guy is fucking most things up and really fucked up with Annalise. Just talk to the fairy and learn shit, like he's so stupid he doesn't even realize how critically important learning/knowledge is.
It's sad that his sister is basically an afterthought in the story. He didn't even get to be alone with her their first time together. He told her nothing even after Lauren's sister was brought in and wouldn't have sex with her until Lauren gave permission.
I found this story while waiting for the author to return from hiatus on a different one. Mostly I've been pretty happy with it, but this chapter was not enjoyable. The torture of Annalise just should not be interspersed with fun times at the baxley grant house. Each could be good on its own but the mood whiplash the reader receives from the tonal shift blindsided me. I was unable to do more than skim the last 3 pages because I couldn't mentally distance myself from what I had just read about Annalise to get back to fun sexy times.
I fu ked 8 different girls for years daily and never got as tired as this kid. What's his problem. Go eat and drink and come back and fuck. Simple
Ok, dude. Tag-team butt-fucking three chicks is mind bending But enough of the cliff-hanging teasers on Annalise. I’ve tapped her as my fav mage, but you’re losing my interest as I’m an ADOF.
So the proclamation he made a few days is already broken.
He either fucked his spell and set no consequences for going after his word, but let'sbe honest he wasn't told he could or should. Or if he had his fairy around maybe he would know his proclamation has been broken. But since he's a horny with 3 beautiful girls on his mind all of his responsibilities just went under his radar. I just hope no one gets permanently harmed for his oversight, or worse.
I must admit I skimmed through the second half of the chapter hoping for more about the plot.
Going through this ch I got caught up on the father broke the proclamation what is the consequence?
So magic proclamations mean literally nothing, like there is no magic to inherently holding it or anything?
Backlash or hit from breaking a proclamation in the magic world... I honestly started skipping to see what the inherent consequences were to breaking a rule or law set by magic...apparently nothing?
Like at the very minimum the magic should have informed him to the rule being broken
This is a great story or series but what the hell was that insert about dad and pruning shears cutting her neck about that was so random it doesn’t need to be there
I have to agree with the comments of wolfbeckett.
He has the power, but doesn't care one bit about it. He is supposed to be in charge, but Laura has all the power. He needs her approval or involvement in every act.
Okay I've really liked the story thus far. However. This chapter was a serious downgrade for me. The author writes the erotic scenes really well and I enjoy reading them, but the problem is that it's impossible for me to enjoy them because of my concern about Annalise being tormented literally in real time as all the sex is happening. Also, the fact that Jeremiah keeps on putting off speaking to his advisor over and over and over again is pissing me off. He comes across as way, way, WAY too unconcerned about this new magical world he's discovered. What should be the biggest revelation of a mind screw in his life he puts off learning about because "lol I'm tired some other time". For these reasons the story is causing me more anxiety than enjoyment.
It's been 7 years since a new chapter has been posted. Maybe one of the other authors, who helps finish incomplete stories, can take this where it should go. I really hope that happens, since this is a great story.
It's been a long time (seven years!?!) but I am back to writing Erotica!
FoF Ch. 8 has been submitted to Literotica - you should expect it in about 3 days to a week from this comment if things work at the usual speed. If you want it faster, and want to read my other stories, you can also check out my Patreon, where Chapter 9 is also posted to Patrons.
Love the story but this is not a place to end it. To many loose ends and future possibilities.
Great story, I really hope your coming back to finish or continue it. Tis cruel to leave us hanging
This is a great story with a very good setup and some worldbuilding that could spawn far more then we see right now. I remember reading this a few years ago and decided to read it again. When I saw the little notes about being updated just months ago I was really happy. Do you have any plans on continuing this story in the near future? I think you could really wrap this up (without closing the book completely so to say) with just one more chapter. But leaving us hanging with Annaliese is just mean.
OMG! We need more! What happens after this? You left us hanging!
I did vote 5 stars for each chapter.
Honestly, I thought it was great. I've enjoyed the series. Wish there were more, feel like you left us hanging.
Love this series...you have spent a great deal of story time fleshing out some great characters plus you have given us a great beginning for a magic culture framework that just begs for an extended group of follow ons. You literally have the framework for a really great novel here with a little reworking. I suggest you get to firming up your metastory outline and GET TO IT!!! This one has the potential to be a really epic fantasy roleplaying novel worthy of the best like Michael Anderle or Judith Berens best magical sagas.
I look forward to the continuation of this great series!!!!
Of Course...5 stars
Sorry but you have so much unanswered. What happened to Annalise? What happened to his seat meeting, the girl at the mall?etc,etc,etc!!
I think someone stole the story and put it on amazon as the life bringer's harem
Hoping the author is actually planning to post the chapter 8 he said he'd posted on his Patreon. This story was enjoyable...I just remember hating that it ended without resolution. I'll have to reread it now.