All Comments on 'Forced'
by nickymartin
- 12 Comments
You can't stop there! What were you thinking??
*ahem*
I mean, that was an interesting story, can't wait to read the second part. :p
Quick, post the next chapter!!!
Very hot, extremely well written sensory description.
nice start -- but you're letting the cat out of the bag too quickly... you say "she" at the beginning and then switch to "he" without foundation. Your character realizes it's a "guy" well after what I presume was a typo. Maybe you should edit/fix this to keep the cat in the bag longer?
A wierd feeling to be sure, then the large knobhead pressing insistingly at my anus gradually forcing its way into me.
Memories began to return, rowing with my girl at the club, then chatting to a couple of guys after sher stormed off, now I was here???.
You guest righty I had been drugged, bollockls, they only had to asked./
Being awakened in bed with a massage? Yummy. Maybe WE should get it on. ;)
What a turn on!!....not so long ago I dreamt( or thought I dreamt ) a guy had come into my bedroom at night and had fucked me in my sleep ( it was no dream it turned out, my neighbour had slipped in just after 2am , then seeing I was out for the count - sleeping pill...he took me )
This was the first story I eved read on this site and I have been looking for it ever since! I can't believe I've finally found it! I love this story I can't wait to read it again.
I wish this writer well and hopes he submits more. These are very well written, erotic stories that are very interesting. I can't say enough about how well written the story is as compared to the many others on this site. Bravo and please write more!