All Comments on 'From a Homely Wife to a Seductress'

I am also hooked to both your beauty and your lovely story telling!! I replied as anonymous in your last train story,and also replying here

Your ability to narrate in a simple but extremely hot and sexy way. Final effect is hotter than the hotest Indian summer

Wish you describe your attire in a little more details.Like you said you have started wearing more low navel sarees , but the part describing that should have been a little more,i felt,than just "tucked my pallu and showed him little more belly and cleavage" types

Wear more sexy sarees and skimpy blouses in weddings,family gatherings,birthday parties. Seduct more people and tell us the juicy details

Rated this 5 stars again and awiting your next RAJNI story with bated breath.

:thumbs up:

oh rajni u r the best hot married superbabe , always u make me so hard horny for u knowing ur experiences

Hi there,

The English has definitely become better from your previous story to this one. But the hotness scale of the content has gone down drastically. I had rated 5 star for the previous story purely for the hot content and the way you developed the charter of Rajni. And I was probably expecting that bit to become better in your next story. But I couldn't give it more than 4 star this time

But don't let my criticism deter you from writing more. You have lot of potential as a writer. Bring out the slutty side of Rajni through articulate description of her dressing, her thoughts, her emotions and her internal fight between being a homely wife and being a seductive slut to satiate the itch of her cunt

Looking forward to more...

Love,

~ Aakash