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I love this so much and come back to it again and again and again. Masterpiece.
I'm really not sure if the author even still uses this site but I've loved this story for YEARS. I come back every once in awhile to see if there's been an addition (and when I'm in desperate need to feel desperate). I absolutely adore Cindy and her quiet pleas to be saved as much as I love Master's dark humor about her inprisionment. There's frankly nothing that doesn't make me wet in this story and I'd buy an actual novel full of it.
...then you're literate enough to read the non-consensual category title. Hit the back button and find something else to read if you don't like the darker side of non-con instead of bitching about how it offended your delicate sensibilities. Yes it is brutal, yes some of us like that in our fantasy-land. Would I like to be that girl in real life? Of course not - six hours on a wooden horse would cause the not fun kind of after effects - but that doesn't stop me enjoying the *fantasy* of someone ruthlessly making me take it whether I want it or not. Non-con is inherently twisted, if you want safe, sane and consensual kink, stick to the BDSM category.
please hurry with ch 7,could you possibly make her drink piss and also have her give a long embarrassing amount of dirty talk,there two favorites of mine,i both love and hate this story,if you could make it more harsh,but also less if that makes any sense?
I think its far beyond time for a payback. How about some 'daterape drug' in his coffee, then REVENGE!!!! I am very sure she would get away with killing him after some 'fun'. There is justifiable homicide. for this kind of abuse.
Comments are to praise good writing or to give constructive criticism, not to whine about the nature of a story. I definitely enjoyed it. Too many non consent stories end up with the victim begging for more; I don't enjoy that. However I realize that is a part of the non consent/reluctance part of the category. So either enjoy or move on to a story you do enjoy but there is no point insulting it.
Honestly don't understand all the complaints. First of all, you don't HAVE to read this story. Second of all, everyone enjoys different things. Who are you to judge what someone else enjoys sexually? People who read stories in the non-con category are already a little kinky. How would you like it if people commented on the twisted nature of a non-con story you really loved? Also, I'm a woman and I think this is hot, though I agree with thunderglory in that I doubt I would enjoy it in reality. Just fantasy for me.
Next chapter, please!!
You people complaining confuse me. Surely you have to expect (at least some) stories in this category to push the boundaries by their very nature? Not to mention that you've clearly been engrossed enough to read this far.
I'm not saying it never works, but thank fuck not everyone feels the compulsion to force notions of romance etc. (and especially, the recipient seeming pretty happy about being forced upon) in this category.
Loved this series, thank you!
Personally I like the story, yeah it's more dark but good non the less. I agree this site needs a more "twisted" section. I much prefer rape stories that the victim is forced to enjoy(this story IS bordering on going to far with me I will admit.) But I find non-con is filled with all too willing stories for my slightly sick puppy,cup of tea. About the story though, I wouldn't mind a bit of a kinder turn js.
First of all, this poor girl has been kidnapped against her will, she is made to watch the newscast of her disappearance...and get punished for crying about it. She is given extremely painful, impossible tasks to complete, and forced to endure horrors so bad that she needs over a month to heal. The "master" in this story is so evil that he makes her torture sound like he is doing her a favor. Now, I'm all for reading a sexy non consent story with everything that goes with it. But this is a whole different ball game. Literotica should open up a whole new category for "sick, twisted, and extremely sadistic and damaging" for you sick people that actually like this bullshit.
It's pretty simple guys, if you don't like this category then switch to a different one. Isn't the whole premise behind non consenting sexual relations kind of wrong at its core anyway? Why is everyone being so negative about this particular story. It is extreme yes, but it isn't real so stop acting all high and mighty! It's a well written story in the appropriate section!