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Click hereHer whole body trembled. Why was she so nervous? She looked around her. Just about everyone in this room would soon go through the same thing. All because of her. It suddenly felt so real.
Her mother showed up by her side. Crying as she always seemed to be doing lately, but this time with a look of pride. Alina bit her lip. She hadn't even considered her parents part in all this. They would become grandparents.
"Where are we going?" Alina asked.
A dozen people answered, and the only thing Alina understood clearly was that they needed to go to another part of the hospital. She pushed the wheelchair towards the elevators. People were talking but she couldn't understand them anymore as her head was busy with other thoughts. Her first child was on the way. Before this day ended, she was going to be a parent.
The End
- COMMENTS
This was a fantastic and engaging series. Super fun themes. You’ve invested a lot of time and care into this story and its characters and a sixth chapter would be a lot of fun.
After being discharged from the hospital, Alina would likely be under doctor’s orders to stay home for a few months to recover. That would probably be very frustrating for Alina, who seems eager to get back to the business of impregnating every hot woman she meets. Her mother was clearly shaken by the attempted killing and hospital recovery and would likely strictly enforce the doctor’s orders.
I’d like to see a Chapter 6 focusing on Alina becoming increasingly sexually frustrated at home while her dear mother who is shaken by recent events becomes smotheringly loving toward Alina. Of course, the mother also found out what Alina had been up to that led to her shooting and this leads to her offering her body to Alina to help in her recovery and express her love for her. It’d be cool if Alina ended up falling in love with her mom and essentially replaces her dad and has most of her children with her mom while breeding other women for a steady income.
All that build up with all those characters and the final chapter of the story takes place in a single hospital room with characters we've never seen before.
The sex was really well written but man what a weak and flimsy ending
Anon needs to chill. Kinda forgetting this is a story about a basically impossible character doing impossible things. That being said, the way people do throw themselves at her is a little much. Nia and Parker were great, but Harper and the rest of the staff might as well had not been for how much they mattered outside the scenes. I also feel that the internal logic got kind of broken by the vouchers and stuff. I get that anyone that can actually hire the agency or Alina is basically ultra loaded, but it’s understood to be dozens of people. It doesn’t fully add up that there would be that many vouchers, but that’s a minor point really. A more major one is that I was rather hoping to see Alina having to interact with the women she got pregnant as that was progressing. This was also a good opportunity to get her parents more involved as I was rather curious how they would take the initial news and then adapt to it, and have these more meaningful character interactions than just the sex. The sex is great, as always, but I think the series as a whole is getting a bit fatigued by the frequency of the sex. Looking further to more if you plan it :)
Alina earned those bullets. She worked hard for them. Why take them away from her?
Lulz aside, this story has a fundamentally evil protagonist. Irredeemably despicable. But lots of people get off on that. Everyone imagines themselves as the commissar, never the kulak.
Actually, some weird headcases do get off on imagining themselves as the metaphorical kulaks in this scenario. In which case they absolutely deserve to get what they wish for, and should get the chance to revel in the reality of their never having a chance to breed or touch a woman ever again for the rest of their pathetic lives. Disgusting.