- Romance
- Hard Times
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All Comments on 'Hard Times'
by Bh76
- 41 Comments
I liked it, but it feels more like an aperitif than a full story. 4* on the rushed feeling, but I love your extended world and interconnected characters.
Good story. You've got a good writing style that I'd like to see more of. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
Good story and very well told. Like said before you have real talent. Thank you for sharing it.
The interlude with John and Aunt Korrie seemed a little out of place to me... like you wanted to have some sex in the story so you added that bit? But maybe I'm just being OverCritical :)
Great story. Keep up the great work. I am enjoying this little world that you have created.
Was OK, not one of your best. Whole thing seemed rushed, not much romance either.
This was a nice story with a feel-good ending. It calls for more resolution of the lives of the mc, Aidan, and Kay. The sex scene was pointless and added nothing to this however. 4.5 stars
Like this one
John Morris and Aunt Korrie well, maybe something will come out of it, it almost felt out of place.
But the story is great
With your promise "More to come." I will be looking for it.
THIS IS A DARN GOOD STORY. SURE, IT'S DIFFERENT FROM THE USUAL LW STORY BUT ISN'T THAT WHAT EVERYBODY SCREAMS ABOUT--EVERY STORY BDING THE SME OLE SAME OLE?
i GAVE YOU A 5! THANKS. CD
SORRY ABOUT THE SPELLING ON MY LAST COMMENT; GOT A NEW KEYBOARD AND IT'S SENSITIVE KEYS AND MY BIG CLUMSY FINGERS ARE RUNNING ME NUTS.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. This is a great first chapter to a great story.
Good story up until the end, when the conclusion seemed forced and unresolved. The conclusion is why I gave it 4 stars instead of 5.
I'm gonna start out by saying I overall enjoyed it, but I do feel this isn't as good as a lot of your other stories. I agree with others that the sex scene with John and Aunt Korrie seemed really out of place.
I also think that the romance between Aiden and Cassidy was underdeveloped. Besides that's he's hot, there's not much info on what Cassidy likes about him and why they would make a good couple. There needed to be more dialogue or inner thoughts about what Aiden does that Cassidy appreciates and scenes showing them get along.
The whole thing with John I think even made this problem a bit worse. Cassidy kept describing how hot John is and that she wouldn't mind having sex with him, soon after describing how hot Aiden is. Feels more like Cassidy is just looking to get laid rather than get into a relationship. Of course, plenty of relationships start out with simple physical attraction. However, in this case it seems like it's the only thing which for a story in the Romance category is kind of disappointing.
Liked it but it felt rushed, with hints of romance, but just hints. Not sure what to make of the Johnny sex scene, didn't feel like it fit into this story. Could have used an endng....
Excellent story! So glad you shared it with us. You're very appreciated. I hope you do at to it, great story line and Characters, thank you. 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!
Really wish the titles would make it possible to read these as a collection.
I agree with I love when great authors tie multiple stories together. Took me a few paragraphs to put it together, but I liked it. Kinda wish it was longer. An easy 5*.
I love the world you've creates and the characters in it, looking forward to more!
Great universe that continues to grow. Better with each addition. This seems a bit of variation chronologically that I hope you can fill in, but a lovely story that continues the storyline.
Nice feel good story. Well I guess it’s mostly feel good, since people died.
I have to agree with your comment!
Schwanze
Helluva story and as far as I know, very original.
Most of all I was entertained!
Please do keep writing and I will keep reading.
A little too over the top, happy ending, inherited $, etc. otherwise a good story.
5. stars
What happens when her mom goes to record with Jimmy!? Does she betray Braden??
I qgree with some others. A lot of potential but felt rushed. Interesting charactors and I just rrd Jimmy Nace's story yhe other day. Not sure if any other storirs in this universe yet, but looking forward to finding out.