All Comments on 'He Takes Ch. 01'

This was a good start. I like the internal turmoil. Looking forward to more. Thank you. xantu

It’s a very intense start you’ve written. It conveys her thoughts and emotions painfully clearly.

The man she’s with though is NOT a Dom, she’s been groomed and abused physically, mentally and emotionally he comes across as an absolute fucking monster disguised as a human being.

She needs to get the hell away from the abusive arsehole, run and never look back. If she’s very very lucky she’ll end up in hospital. Her only reason for returning to him

is a clear case of Stockholm Syndrome. I may not be able to continue reading this it’s so depressing I just hope it’s not based on real life.