All Comments on 'Heaven in the Desert Ch. 06'

Please dont make me wait two years for an update....i really like reading the stories on lit and understand the "everyday" real life comes first, but finish what you started, especially when this is so good....please😍😍😍

I had honestly almost forgotten about this and it delighted me to see this next chapter.

I loved you writing her helping the tribal women with the displaced orphans with how she worked, followed by the secret wedding to him and her adopted son. All of it was so touching.

As much as I hate to state it, their first sex together lacked the same chemistry and fireworks as during their first interactions. While you kind of hinted at a possible abduction, it shocked me you did write it in, although on the positive side I didn't see it coming.

Great to see this back and I echo the earlier poster's wish we will have another chapter MUCH sooner. 4

Hey, hope all is well, I find myself coming back to my favorite authors and wondering and hoping if they have maybe found time to finish up their story.

You might have turnedd it into a self published novel or something but at least tell us what you had in mind as the plot. I feel a bit cheated after hours or reading and enjoying your story.